Bryce Dashwood

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----------=| Bryce Dashwood |=----------
Bryce Dashwood Still2_by_sweetmoon

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"The Sound of Truth"
- As I lay Dying -

Spoiler:

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---------=| General Information |=---------
Name: Bryce Dashwood
Age: 17
Race: Human
Racial Bonuses: I 'unno
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Unknown
Nationality: I 'unno

---------=| Skills 'n' Abilities |=---------

| Charisma |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Skilled

| Martial Weaponry |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Skilled

| Brawling ; Street Fighting |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Skilled

| Musical Skills ; Flute |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Very Skilled

| Stealthiness |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Poor

| Marksmanship |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Poor

| Technical Engineering ; 'Steampunkery' |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Shitty as Ball Sacks

| Agility ; Flexiblity ; Finesse |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Skilled

| Perception ; Senses |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Skilled

---------=| Description 'n' Appearance |=---------
General Appearance:
WIP
-----------| Details |---------
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Height: 5 Foot Seven ; Average
Weight: 176 Pounds
Short Description: Young looking. Looks like he's in his young twenties. He has semi - long hair, colored brown. It passes his eyes, but is usually placed to the side to keep his perfect eye sight well, and not blocked by his hair. He wears an old looking brown scarf around his neck at all times. His eyes are a generic brown.
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---------=| Personality 'n' Traits |=---------
Alignment: Good Neutral

Positive Traits: Intelligent, Humble, Goodwill, Sympathetic, Respectful, Responsible, Adventurous
Neutral Traits: Modest, Curious, Systematic, Well-Mannered,
Negative Traits: Nervous, Open Minded, Self-Reliant, Mistrusting, Shy,

---------=| Deity 'n' Affiliations |=---------
Deity: None
Affiliations: None
Record: Clean
Occupation: Musical Preformer
Other Information:
N/A

---------=| Tasks 'n' Goals |=---------

---( Eternal )---
- Make Friends -

----( Completed )----
- Find a Home -

---( In-Progress )---
- Make a Living -

---( Failed ; Canceled )---
- Nothin' -

---------=| Inventory 'n' Equipment |=---------
=| Weaponry |=

Nothin'

=| Appparel |=

Black Loose Shirt ; Torso ; Long-Sleeved
White Undershirt ; Torso ; Short-Sleeved
Tattered Brown Scarf ; Neck
Leather Brown Boots ; Feet
Tight Black Jeans ; Legs
Leather Gloves ; Hands
Black Leather Belt ; Waist
Back Pack ; Back
Leather Sash ; Torso ; Pouches

=| Inventory |=

Flute ; Back Pack
Key to His Home ; Pocket
Elk Leather Pouch ; Pocket
Feather Pen
Small Bottle of Black Ink
Torn Leather Journal ; Back Pack
One Thousand One Hundred Gold Coins ; Elk Leather Pouch

=| General Belongings |=

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---------=| Gallery |=---------

Being Cool
Portrait
As a Child ; Being Protected
Discovering Alcohol
Young Child

thank you zaku for the format <3

Guest

AND HIS STALWART GHOUL MANSERVANT, ARGYLE!

Guest

DARING DASHWOOD.

lul.

Guest

Also, did he dye his hair Cyan and color his eyes Orange? or was he born like that.

Guest

he iz speshal babeh.

but ok he colors dye his hair.

eyes are realz

Guest

OK

How speshull? Iz it magic spezzsshul? OR A FAIRY CAST A SPELL ON HIM :OOOOOOOOOOOO

Guest

YUSH!

fairy case clooooboaffo.

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I'm going to be really, really honest with you.

He looks like a really, really big homosexual. And quite frankly stupid. I never liked anime characters that had ridiculous hair colors, and eye combinations like they just fell out of a kid's coloring book, no offense.

And 'sexy beast' as a description was kinda'.. yeah.

But it's your character, not mine, just some opinion.

Guest

Sexy beast is temporary until I get bored enough to write a REAL description.

:/

WHAT MAKES U THINK HE'S NOT A HOMO!?

> Neutral

Posts : 688 Join date : 2009-02-18

Flaming aside, it's time to go over this character.

Quote :: | Charisma |
[ | | ||| | | | | | ] - Mastered

That's not mastered. Mastered is maxed out. Along with some other errors, this looks as if it was a copy-paste of Zaku's profile page.

Quote :: Eye Color: Orang

I'm a bit iffy about this. Have you ever, in your life, seen someone with orange eyes? He's a human, so unless he has some strange backstory behind him, he shouldn't have them naturally, and contacts haven't been invented yet.

Quote :: Distinguishing Features: Bryce's eyes are very appealing to most people. They

It's kind of godmoding to say that. Let the people decide.

Quote :: | Agility ; Flexiblity ; Finesse |
[ | | | | | | | | ] - Mastered

That's kind of overboard. A master contortionist would be on this level. I don't think he'll be doing anything like that.

Quote :: | Musical Skills ; Flute |
[| | | | | | | | | | ] - Mastered

This means he's quite possibly in the top five most skilled players in existence. Tone it down.

Quote :: | Stealthiness |
[ | | | | | | | | | | ] - Mastered

Not a superspy. Needs more toning down.

I'm moving this into the approval section until it's finished.

Guest

is it better now?

I'll do something about the eyes soon.

Guest

Wait.
Is this not fantasy RP?
He should be able to have orange eyes.
It's not supposed to be totally realistic, expecially if it's fantasy.

Guest

Thanks, apple.

Here's my crappy edit.

Spoiler:

Orange or blue.

Guest

They look better blue, definitely, if not more realistic.

I was never one for orange and blue clashing together... Just personal opinion.

Guest

Blue it is.

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His pic reminds me of this dude.

Bryce Dashwood Auel_d

Subject: Re: Bryce Dashwood Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:58 pm

OrangeApple wrote:: Wait.
Is this not fantasy RP?
He should be able to have orange eyes.
It's not supposed to be totally realistic, especially if it's fantasy.

You're right! Brb, making rainbow-colored quintuplets.

Oh, I know! They can be in a band! That plays synthesizers!

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Munroe wrote:

OrangeApple wrote:: Wait.
Is this not fantasy RP?
He should be able to have orange eyes.
It's not supposed to be totally realistic, especially if it's fantasy.

You're right! Brb, making rainbow-colored quintuplets.

Oh, I know! They can be in a band! That plays synthesizers!

Bryce Dashwood Interstella-5555-crescendolls-blue-ver

:O

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Munroe wrote:

OrangeApple wrote:: Wait.
Is this not fantasy RP?
He should be able to have orange eyes.
It's not supposed to be totally realistic, especially if it's fantasy.

You're right! Brb, making rainbow-colored quintuplets.

Oh, I know! They can be in a band! That plays synthesizers!

You can't tell me, in any fantasy, there hasn't been purple, or orange, or some other odditized color for hair and eyes.
Even most MMORPG's have odd colors, despite how serious. That's the point of fantasy, not totally real, but not totally unreal.

And there's an exception to skin color for race, Narran.
Daft Punk just happens to be blue anime-aliens.

Posts : 688 Join date : 2009-02-18

Yes, but he's human, and he has no freaky backstory to explain the fact that he's got freakish eyes of death.

Might I say that's a great edit, Ness? Anyway, he still needs a birthplace, and possibly a more elaborate description than "sexy beast."

Other than that and the fact that he's almost six feet tall and only 120 pounds, this character's almost good to go.

Guest

Wait, can I have a thread cleanup.

Subject: Re: Bryce Dashwood Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:11 am

OrangeApple wrote:: You can't tell me, in any fantasy, there hasn't been purple, or orange, or some other odditized color for hair and eyes.
Even most MMORPG's have odd colors, despite how serious.

Not in my experience. And if MMO characters have it, it's because the people choose to have it, not because it fits into the genre.

This post will be deleted anyway.

i liek mudkipz

no u

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Munroe wrote:

OrangeApple wrote:: You can't tell me, in any fantasy, there hasn't been purple, or orange, or some other odditized color for hair and eyes.
Even most MMORPG's have odd colors, despite how serious.

Not in my experience. And if MMO characters have it, it's because the people choose to have it, not because it fits into the genre.

This post will be deleted anyway.

i liek mudkipz

no u

I see what you did there...

Guest

Lol. Me too.

Ness Tea wrote:: Wait, can I have a thread cleanup.

Someone, please.