Mystis \'Scars\' Vale

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Name: Mystis Vale
Age: 27
Race: Half-Elf (Vampire)
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Surna, Talibar

---------=| Description 'n' Appearance |=---------
-----------| Details |---------
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Bright Orange
Height: 6'1
Weight: 180 lbs

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---------=| Personality 'n' Traits |=---------
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Positive Traits: Ambitious, Strong Will, Flexible, Fast
Negative Traits: Headstrong, Aggressive,
Languages: Common, Slight Elvish

---------=| Deity 'n' Affiliations |=---------
Deity: None.
Affiliations: None.
Record: Assault x2, Assault on a Minor x1, Arson x1, Extortion x1, Armed Assault x3, Robbery x1, Jailbreak x1
Occupation: Prisoner on Parole.

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---------=| Biography |=---------
Mystis was raised by a rich family, he was highly aware of his surroundings and often noticed small things others missed, but he was always interested in the poor people of Surna, wondering how they got by without dying. He wandered into the 'bad' part of town and was surprised only to see a few bums. He wandered around a bit before he whipped around and grabbed a pickpocket's wrist. The pickpocket stared at him in horror as Mystis laughed. Mystis had known he was there the entire time! The pickpocket begged Mystis for forgiveness and pleaded for his mercy, but Mystis knew thieves and knew he would just try it again. He dragged the thief across the city and tossed him off the cliff, no one knew it was Mystis that did it, all they knew is that it was one less pickpocket...for Mystis to compete with. Mystis grew older and eventually left to Surna's woods by himself. He stumbled upon a bandit encampment and nonchalantly walked into it, the bandits responded quickly with swords and knives, telling him to leave or be killed. Mystis laughed a blood curdling laugh and walked right between them, they did nothing as he walked towards the leaders hut. He set foot inside the hut with a loud, intimidating thud and the bandit leader turned with a look of hilarity in his eyes as he saw the man standing before him. He walked up to him and measured almost twice Mystis' height. He stood before Mystis and slowly felt himself shrinking as Mystis stared back at him with an evil glare. Mystis then stated, quite plainly to the bandit leader "I would like to join your ranks." in his usual heart striking voice. The bandit leader looked over Mystis and waved his hand in dismissal. Mystis took this as an opportunity and grabbed the knife at his side, stabbing the bandit leader in the back, letting him slide off his knife and onto the hut floor. Mystis stared at him with a slight tilt of his head, grinning to himself as he cut a line across the palm of his hand. Mystis walked out of the camp and took leadership over it, he soon dispatched of each bandit, one by one, stealing the best of their armor, claiming the land, and scarring his body after every kill...

---------=| Vale Family History |=---------
The Vale family is a well known family who started as adept magic using elves. Somewhere along the history, Artus, a male elf in the family, conceived a child with Alandra, a human in the Emertin family. They were both rich families and they got along well. Soon the entire Vale family was half-elves. Mystis is the son of Artus and Alandra's daughter, Alexandra, along with his sister. The Vale family is most wizards, but each half of the family had their arguments. So eventually the warrior side of the Vale family, and the wizard side of the family separated. Mystis and his sister were on the wizard side of the argument at the time. Him and his sister grew up in an excellent school but Mystis always 'hung out' with the poor kids. Mystis was found to not be very good with magic, his anger always driving the spells to be sparks of flame, or bursts of cold. Mystis enrolled in battleschool soon after his magical skills were assessed. He was always a good student but this drove the family to push him to the warrior side of the family. Mystis hasn't seen his elven sister or parents since...

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---------=| Tasks 'n' Goals |=---------

Steal people's stuff - ~~Canceled~~
Give himself scars after a kill -~~Canceled~~
Teach people who's boss -~~Canceled~~
Survive the bounty on his head -Complete
Impress Captain Dautry -~~Canceled~~
Change himself -Complete
Prove that Justice and Law are corrupt -~~Canceled~~
Get out of Jail Alive -Complete
Start a new life -On-Going

---------=| Inventory 'n' Equipment |=---------
[ Stitched Leather Armor]
[ Black Cloak]
[ Canteen of Blood ]
[ Titanium Longsword]
[ Steel Dagger]
[ Iron Dagger]
[ Lead Coated Steel Shortsword]
[ Vryium Shortsword]

thorogoodd wrote:: Deity: Cyric

Current Task:
Steal people's stuff - On-Going
Give himself scars after a kill - Eternal
Teach people who's boss - On-Going

Sigh.

I'd like this to be approves/denies, not random goings on about something I posted, unless it contradicts lore or someone has a suggestion.

thorogoodd wrote:: I'd like this to be approves/denies, not random goings on about something I posted, unless it contradicts lore or someone has a suggestion.

Re-read Cyric's page.

It seems okay, but whatever, I'll come up with something to change it too. (Just re-re-read it AGAIN and it still looks fine, but okay)

Edit: Changed it to Bane, If someone has another complaint I'll just make him an Atheist

thorogoodd wrote:: It seems okay, but whatever, I'll come up with something to change it too. (Just re-re-read it AGAIN and it still looks fine, but okay)

Edit: Changed it to Bane, If someone has another complaint I'll just make him an Atheist

There aren't atheist characters per se, just nonreligious. In Aeria, there's confirmation that deities exist. Real religion is based on faith.

The character's fine, no special powers or anything. I'll throw an accept.

Yes. If your character's an atheist, the gods will come down and throw eggs at him until he changes his mind.

Psycheandromida wrote:: There aren't atheist characters per se, just nonreligious. In Aeria, there's confirmation that deities exist. Real religion is based on faith.

The character's fine, no special powers or anything. I'll throw an accept.

Actually, if your character believes that the "gods" are not truly gods, but simply very powerful entities, they could be Atheistic. Or if they're ignorant, and deny the existence of any such thing. Because even in Olden, there is still a lack of evidence that Gods exist, and the Gods don't exactly appear to everyone all over the place. Priests receiving blessings can be explained off as simple magic tricks.

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Oi! I like the religous stuff going on here and what not, Buuuuu-uuutt... This is really about Thoro's Character Mystis, So, Even if it doesn't count,I like the story and the set up seems alright enough to be belivable,You got an Accept in my book.

Kills young children who thieve.

Sounds good.

He's ugly. I approve. Gogo ugly characters.

Bumped

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Really not asking for much, I toss my approval if it counts.

Why not? I've seen worse.

I'm moving this to characters section finally, but http://aeria.omgforum.net/approval-f9/a-reminder-t1510.htm

I've been seeing this happen often. No more warnings for the next offender.

Added a contact.

Chandra + Mystis = a lot of dead people.

Soon as I get back, the two have to meet up.

Moderator Posts : 851 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31

Speakinf of which, were are you for those of us who don't have a TnB account to check the LoA thread.

Using a PC with Windows 95 while mine gets fixed, and just finishing up this legal crap/getting my life back in order.

Scalene wrote:: Chandra + Mystis = a lot of dead people.

Soon as I get back, the two have to meet up.

Lol, the two should meet Reaver.

Scars is already being hunted by a lot of people x.x

Some more backup would be awesome! Very Happy

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Chandra + Mystis + Noddy = Billizons of dead peoplez.

Reager wrote:: Chandra + Mystis + Noddy = Billizons of dead peoplez.

You underestimate.

Gambit wrote:

Reager wrote:: Chandra + Mystis + Noddy = Billizons of dead peoplez.

You underestimate.

My original point regarding Reaver. Which isn't implying a team up.

I like the family history, but reading the bio, the character seems to be a random psycho. What drives him to be so evil? And on a side note, his alignment seems more like Neutral Evil to me.

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