The Endless Road - Commentary

I like it, the style and all. It reminds me of a lot of the stories I did for RTRP, without some of the wackier elements, but I'm sure those will come. Keep it upppp, don't let the lack of feedback getcha doooown.

Poor Nibbles. ;-;

I liked it.

The odd quirks in the story, and the strange contradictions in the prologue were interesting.

I originally made it to sound like those odd stories where the character is obviously mentally troubled... So there might still be parts that dont add up from the recent poor editing on my part.