Rutabega
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 | Subject: Re: Aer  Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| 'S lookin' good now. Bear in mind elementals are hard to RP without having them seem OPed. | |
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Aer Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:33 pm | |
| Yeah, if someone RP's with me and they accuse me of powergaming or being OP'd, I am just going to let them reverse part of the battle, unless it was obviously not powergaming or OP'd, but that starts arguments and ugh. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Aer Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:56 am | |
| - Gambit wrote:
- Well, nothing us wrong with it besides the story could be a bit better than,
he did this...
he then did this...
he did this to begin with...
he did the first thing again with a slight twist.
I'd give it an accept. This is only true for the first three lines, so i don't think it's that bad. Otherwise the story is acceptable really, powers aren't OP, interesting character, need more elementals, yadda yadda approved on my part. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Aer Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:12 pm | |
| Do note that as an Elemental and not a Genesi, it's birthplace would not be Sida. It'd be Akadi's realm. | |
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Aer Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:17 pm | |
| Alrighty, thanks for the info. | |
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