Subject: Star Wars: Oldenated Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:52 pm
STAR WARS: REVENGE OF THE FANFIC
I'm bored.
I guess I'll write stuff.
Sign up is easy, just present a character, give me a basic rundown of their personality, tell me what you want to be, and I'll do it.
Note that the story is 200 years before the battle of Yavin.
You cannot be main characters (there may be some main characters squeezed in here and there but they can't be olden-twists of them), fill out this form: Name: Personality: Age: Race: Job:
Vincent Dadoni -- Human -- Jedi Knight John Udgrad -- Human -- Mercenary Mystic 'Scars' Vale -- Human -- Republic Senator. Darth Calneekh -- Zabrak -- Sith Dark Lord Zack Flame -- Human -- Sith Spy Teeble Soldur -- Human -- None Marius Shire -- Human -- Jedi Master Alex Munroe -- Human -- Jedi Knight Piotr Cyran -- Human -- Jedi Librarian
Last edited by Blitz on Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:37 am; edited 18 times in total
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:57 pm
Exerious, he is very creepy and loves the color black and is tall and hates everyone and wants everyone to die and loves blood and wants to kill people. Yay!
I want him to be Darth Maul.
thorogoodd
Posts : 701 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 27 Location : London, Ontario
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:53 pm
Name: Teeble Sodur Personality: Very excitable, constantly hyper, tends to repeat things, and shouts/emphasizes them the 2nd time. Obsessed with hair. Obsessed with everything, but not as much as hair. Very emotionally fragile. No sense of personal space. No sense of danger. Likes to hug legs. Eats everything. Age: 32 Race: Human Job: Jobless Bum
Notes: Lacks training, but is extremely force receptive when he starts to obsess over something, so things may start spontaneously happening in the area while he's obsessiving over, oh, say, hair. His victim's hair may become medusa-like hair for no reason.
He's also extremely short at about 3'10", and has a tendency leap at and catch projectiles in his mouth, even if they're not entirely solid.
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:56 pm
It was actually pretty good. Flame was just the right amount of bad ass. The two apprentice thing, one on the side of the light, one of the dark, always works well.
Though, if you write them that long every time, you may run out of juice pretty fast.
Kain
Posts : 1427 Join date : 2009-03-24 Location : Somewhere Pat doesn't want me to be
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:08 am
Looks like it's going well for the first chapter.
You got Teeble right, more or less, I'm glad he made an appearance . You got his speech -almost- down, but his talking pattern is distinct. Message me for details if you want to know. To clear one thing up, he isn't obsessed with his own hair, he's obsessed with -other people's- hair.
Blitz
Posts : 820 Join date : 2009-12-20 Age : 30 Location : ATL, yo.
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:09 am
copy that red team leader.
The Jedi and Sith apprentice will turn out to the be the main story soon enough, but I'm going to give the other characters a personality first and try to think of how I can include them in it, or maybe even give them their own side-story. Point is, need more characters.
Mack THE GLORY
Posts : 1415 Join date : 2010-04-06 Age : 43
Subject: Re: Star Wars: Oldenated Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:25 am
Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:52 pm
