Name: Thor Dreadwind Age: 98 Gender: Male Race: Elf Birthplace: Athena, far away from Surna.
Biography: Thor was born in Athena, taken to the Ahdsurian Isles when he turned five. He was raised there, trained by the inhabitants in the ways of Archery, basic Ice magic, and Dual-Weapon combat. His training was long and harsh, but after turning eighty, he found the need to test himself. He took a small boat to Talibar, where he moved through the forests, eventually coming upon the city of Surna, where he now resides.
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Alignment: Neutral, True Neutral Favored Enemy: Don't have one. Favored Weapon: Long Bow Deity: Lathander Current Task: Don't have one.
Physical: Height: 5'8" Weight: 105 pounds Hair Color: Brown Long Hair Eye Color: Navy Blue
Inventory Nothing yet.
Last edited by wshbone on Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:09 pm; edited 3 times in total
Subject: Re: Thor Dreadwind Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:17 pm
Thor is not a typical elven name.
Markka Moderator
Posts : 916 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 31
Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
Subject: Re: Thor Dreadwind Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:25 pm
Archery*. Bargaining is a useless skill, really, as your actions with players will deem the outcome. At least in my opinion. Also, I'm not sure but... 'Athena'?
Aside from the slightly odd first name and nitpicking, this seems acceptable.
Xeloras Arrogant Prick of an Admin
Posts : 337 Join date : 2010-09-22
Subject: Re: Thor Dreadwind Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:44 pm
Ehhhh, that's a really weak bio, if you can prove you can write fluently, then people tend to be more trusting towards you. Also, magic's a really general field, if you don't have any magical abilities I wouldn't even put it there, if you start learning some, then you could put the specific type there. I'm willing to accept it, I'd just really like a little more on the bio.
wshbone
Posts : 3 Join date : 2011-02-06
Subject: Re: Thor Dreadwind Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:33 pm
Xeloras wrote:
Ehhhh, that's a really weak bio, if you can prove you can write fluently, then people tend to be more trusting towards you. Also, magic's a really general field, if you don't have any magical abilities I wouldn't even put it there, if you start learning some, then you could put the specific type there. I'm willing to accept it, I'd just really like a little more on the bio.
I'll try write a new bio later today.
Edit: I redid the bio and few other things. Hope that is good.
Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:32 pm
