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PostSubject: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:18 am



Name: Devyn Sorlan
Age: 56
Race: Elf
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Imperia, Talibar


---------=| Description 'n' Appearance |=---------
-----------| Details |---------
Hair Color: Strawberry Blonde
Eye Color: Red-ish White
Height: 5'9
Weight: 130 lbs

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---------=| Personality 'n' Traits |=---------
Alignment: Lawful Good
Positive Traits: Positive, Kind-Hearted, Caring, Curious
Negative Traits: Moody, Opinionated
Languages: Common, Elvish

Basic Skills:

Intelligence & Cunning
<{ | | | | | | | - - - }>


Devyn is very knowledgeable on fire magic, healing magic, and general healing practices thanks to his father, and his mentor, Lisa Higgins.

Strength
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Devyn is slightly below other elves when it comes to strength, as he does not do too much physical labour.


Agility & Dexterity
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Devyn is not as agile or dexterous as other elves, due to him not maintaining his top physical fitness.


Perception
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Devyn has no advantages or disadvantages to his perceptive abilities yet.


Stamina & Endurance
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Devyn is slightly weaker when it comes to Endurance, due to being slightly frail, but he has a lot of stamina because of his magic.


Willpower & Fortitude
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Devyn has a high willpower and fortitude thanks to his magic and the injuries he's seen on people.

Advanced Skills:
Fire Magic:
{ | | | | | - - - - -}

Devyn has spent a few years practicing fire magic, and training under Lisa Higgins, a master of the elements. He has learned many spells.

Spells:

Fire Serpents
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Devyn has, with fire manipulation and generation magic, created his own spell. Fire Serpents. It allows him to produce serpents of varying number, length, and heat with fire. He can surround his enemies with the serpents or entwine them in the serpents, thought they could escape, they would feel a physical pressure from the serpents as if they were living.

Fireball
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Devyn has trained with the most basic fire spell, fireball, loosely. He has not found it very useful to himself but has been taught that it is the benchmark for any fire spell and will improve his ability to control and generate flames. So he practices it often.


Flamewall
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Devyn uses another, rather chaotic and dangerous fire spell that he created. He shoots up flames from the ground and maintains them wherever he likes. Typically between him and a threat. It's dangerous because it's hard to control and he doesn't have much practice with it. He could potentially burn himself or others by accident with the flames, or burn something down.

Healing Magic:
{ | | | - - - - - - -}

Devyn learned healing magic from his father, loosely, he did studying with other healers though. Recently he has lost interest in healing and instead gone to fire magic, because of his lack of practice or study, he has lost a lot of skill with it.

---------=| Deity 'n' Affiliations |=---------
Deity: None.
Affiliations: Archivists of Light
Occupation:
Apprentice Of Lisa Higgins, Student in the Archivists of Light

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---------=| Biography |=---------

-To Be Re-Written (Ugh)-

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---------=| Tasks 'n' Goals |=---------

Become a better mage -On-Going
Find a real career -On-Going


---------=| Inventory 'n' Equipment |=---------
[ Black Jacket]
[ Black Pants]
[ Black Boots ]
[ Purple Archivists Robe ]
[ Archivists Student Seal ]
[ Fire-Patterned Scarf]


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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:18 am

Re-apping for a older and more magically evolved Devyn.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:30 am

Needs more pyromanic elves who are friends with necromancers.

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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:31 am

Mirage's got a boyfriend.~

I guess I'll accept this, might wait for further opinions. The time-skip sort of bugs me. I hate it when people do that because everything always seems... "out of tune", so to speak. Children grow into their 20's while their parents stay the same, ripe young age, to give an example that has, in fact, happened before..

Also. Might I ask why his eyes are reddish? He an albino or something?

mirage and devyn sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.


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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:39 am

Exactly why I have/had conflicting feelings about this. Mainly the power level.

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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:50 am

His eyes are red-ish because they are effected by the magic he uses. It was better explained in his old page, also his parents are dead (they didn't used to be but his father recently died) and the time skip is by one year. I skipped a year because of my absence, and Devyn being an older age would allow me to better include him in the RP and better RP him as a character. I wish I had of made him that old in the beginning.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:02 am

Markka wrote:
Needs more pyromanic elves who are friends with necromancers.

Drakeson..


Ugh..

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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:09 am

Gambit wrote:
Markka wrote:
Needs more pyromanic elves who are friends with necromancers.

Drakeson..


Ugh..

I'm slightly offended to have my "pyromaniac elf" compared to Drakeson. I don't actually know Drakeson, neither seem him in action, but I know he was a huge powergamer. If you have anything else more useful to say, or if that was a way of denying it but you're beating around the bush, please clarify.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:52 am

Your character is a reminder of the most powergamed character alive.

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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:59 am

I feel his Serpent skill is a bit high, seeing what it's possible to do with it; also, if he's going to have healing magic, that should have its own skill bar, as opposed to sticking it in intelligence. As muc as I wish I could, I can't use brainpower to heal people. Also, when you say, "many spells", do you mean that he only knows those spells in fire magic? Or is there some implied spells there as well?
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:30 pm

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Age: 19
Race: Elf

Doesn't that make him a baby?
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:36 pm

Ramona wrote:
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Age: 19
Race: Elf

Doesn't that make him a baby?

it does

devlyn's a babby
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:38 pm

Mack wrote:
Ramona wrote:
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Age: 19
Race: Elf

Doesn't that make him a baby?

it does

devlyn's a babby


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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:13 pm

Gambit wrote:
Your character is a reminder of the most powergamed character alive.

Richard Crimson. Kardilaz. Peter Cyran (the android). John Leed.

Regarding this character, I guess it's fine, except that I'm hesitant about the magic skills; the seem a bit high for someone his age. Someone at age 19 would only have been able to use magic for a year or so.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:15 pm

I'll include healing magic momentarily, and as for the skill level, I can bump it down to five or four if you like. As for the Fire Serpents thing, he has the most practice with that specific spell. And there are no implied spells, theres the obvious small things about fire magic, parlour tricks and the likes, but anything combat-worthy is in the app.

Devyn was using magic at a young age before the Sacred Field thing was included, would all that time spent using magic and practicing with magic be void now? I'm unsure.

Yes he's young for an elf.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:31 pm

ALRIGHT. Retconning part of his past. He was older the entire time, like fourty-thirty years older.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:37 pm

Mirage has some interesting tastes...

Anyway, I'd like Flame Serpents down two points, mainly because of the massive amount of versatility with it, but after you fix that, I find this Acceptable.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:47 pm

Two points? That makes his most practiced spell the same as Fireball, one of his least practiced spells, which sorta defeats the purpose.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:07 pm

you fail to realise the damage that snakes made out of flames could cause

not to mention the high degree of cunning needed in both conjuration and fire magic to even make the fire react properly
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:34 pm

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To be re-written now.

I'm tired of the avoidance tactics Olden members employ.

Biographies are an important section of a character page, and they take time, which is a good thing. It shows effort and motivation.

Unless a biography with appropriate effort is added, i'm not going to be approving this any time soon.

Already un-sure about the whole 20 years skip forward, and the ret-conning of the whole character's previous escapades.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:36 pm

I ret-conned his age, not his past. And I had an bio, but I accidentally snipped his page without thinking so now I gotta re-write it.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:41 pm

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Biographies are an important section of a character page,

backstories are not necessary for approval, prhy.
keep that in mind.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:56 pm

Mack wrote:
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Biographies are an important section of a character page,

backstories are not necessary for approval, prhy.
keep that in mind.


Hence 'an important section' not 'a required element'.


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I ret-conned his age, not his past.

Age is a huge factor in how people act. Massive, even. 20-30 year old Devyn isn't going to act like 60 year old Devyn at all, let alone 60 year old Devyn with a mastery of fire.

My advice is for you to just create a new character and put Devyn to rest if he wasn't working out as he was.

This large a change doesn't seem necessary, y'know?
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:01 pm

I'm going to continue with the change, and a 60 year old elf would act the same as a 16 year old kid, more or less. Also, he doesn't have a mastery of fire. He had fire magic before the change because he's been training with Lisa Higgins for a while.
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PostSubject: Re: Devyn Sorlan   Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:37 am

By mastery of fire I meant a massive fire magic boost or however.

But yeah, I hadn't noticed he was an elf.

Fair enough, I am dumb.

Other than that, there isn't much wrong with this. Issues I had were resolved, so, provided you'll write a biography later,

Approval.
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