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Achosi

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PostSubject: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 6:18 am



Ganelon Brama Ganelonbrama

Description

Name: Ganelon Brama

Age: 22

Race: Human (Sanctimonian)

Gender: Male

Birthplace: The roads southeast of Exemplar.

Affiliation: The Monster Hunters.

Alignment: Lawful Neutral


Physical Description

Height: 5'11" ft

Weight: 197 lbs

Build: Muscular

Skin Color: Light

Hair Color: Dark Brown

Eye Color: Green

Other Features: None.


Skills

Unarmed: Ganelon can hold his own in a barroom brawl, but has no technique to speak of.

Swordsmanship: His training with Jedai, along with his recent experiences with the Monster Hunters, have given him a good grasp of blade-work.

Shield Defense: He still uses shields somewhat inefficiently, but has a growing understanding of their proper use.

Heavy Armor: Ganelon has become more practiced in the use of heavy armor, and his movements while wearing it have become smoother.

Magical Ability: He has some untapped magical potential that Alec identified. As of yet, he has absolutely no experience or training that let's him tap into what magical talent he possesses.


Biography

Back Story:
Significant Events:

Inventory

Carried:
Stored:


Tasks

Catch Sun and Moon. On-going
Help track down the mysterious murderer. On-going
Make an attempt at learning magic from Alec. On-going
Keep Linera from getting herself killed. Indefinite
Join the Monster Hunters. Completed



DnD Stuff

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Achosi

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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 6:21 am

7 AM, no sleep. Will add picture soon.
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Name: Mirage Silverspine
Age: 17
Race: Human

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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 6:35 am

Quite basic character and a neat page. You could separate the backstory into a couple paragraphs, perhaps. Reading a wall of text generally isn't pleasant for the eyes.

Otherwise, approvable.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 12:48 pm

Edited to make the bio easier to read. Thanks for bringing that to me, Markka. I'm not sure what I was thinking when I made it a wall of text.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 1:00 pm

Nice character, I'll give it an accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 09, 2012 1:48 pm

I don't see any issues, and I really like the period details. Accepted.

Moving to characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Jan 11, 2012 11:01 am

Edit: Added picture. Armor is not accurate, but I felt the picture fits Ganelon.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeSun Jan 22, 2012 11:28 pm

Edit: Needed some serious updating. Picture, equipment, tasks updated. Skills added (no bars). Also updated the page layout to something I feel looks better.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 12:00 am

Here's to the bard and hi-
Nevermind.

Also needs more centering, like all the cool kids are doing these days.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 12:03 am

Grats to spadge on Gan's pass.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 12:46 am

Rutabega wrote:
Here's to the bard and hi-
Nevermind.

Also needs more centering, like all the cool kids are doing these days.

Centering is for scrubs.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 1:43 am

I wish my model was that cool. Shit. How do I donate?
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 6:53 am

Accep
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeTue Feb 14, 2012 6:12 pm

Updated his page.

Among some tweaks to make it look better, I added a silver dagger he purchased, subtracting 120 shillings. I wasn't sure what they would cost, so please correct the amount if I'm wrong.

I necro this because it was RPed that Alec identified some latent magic ability in Ganelon. If anyone feels he should be put through approval again, please do so.

I'd also like to clarify that the DnD portion of his abilities have no effect on regular roleplay. They're only to be used on the occasions that DnD is used in a hunt.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 12:24 pm

Eh, the potential to be able to use magic isn't a big deal. If he needs approval, it would be after learning some magic.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 1:07 pm

Kain wrote:
Eh, the potential to be able to use magic isn't a big deal. If he needs approval, it would be after learning some magic.

Wasn't sure. I'll bump this thread again if he is ever able to lift his x-wing out of the swamp. poor humor abilities, activate!
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 1:20 pm

Ganelon can't lift his x-wing? What will Linera say?
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 2:57 pm

Munroe wrote:
Ganelon can't lift his x-wing? What will Linera say?

Don't worry. A wrinkled old muppet will get involved, and his x-wing will come right up.
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Name: Judith Both
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 3:28 pm

Any *other* important events you wanna mention? Hmmm... HMMMM?!?!?!?!

Razz j/k, love the bio, it's about time.
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 4:23 pm

Jackxter wrote:
Any *other* important events you wanna mention? Hmmm... HMMMM?!?!?!?!

Fair enough. Added task.

"Bang his hot, slutty, elf girlfriend 'til the sun come up. Completed"
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeWed Feb 15, 2012 5:19 pm

Mmmm, got a task of my own to add.

- Reveal to Ganelon she has a dick.

Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Ganelon Brama   Ganelon Brama Icon_minitimeThu Feb 16, 2012 4:27 am

Jackxter wrote:
Mmmm, got a task of my own to add.

- Reveal to Ganelon she has a dick.

Razz

Moot'll be over her.
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