Kardilaz

Nop, bad idea

And then there was Kardilaz again >_>

I don't know if you remember last time, but the last time you reapplied for this character I informed you of the difference between an Elemental and a Genesi.

If you don't remember, Elementals are immortal creatures, made of their element, with great power over their element but rudimentary, animal intelligence. Genesi are mortals (usually humans) born with a natural affinity for one or another element. They can control their element without prior training, but do need experience and teaching to grow in their skill, and are usually less immediately powerful than Genesi. They are otherwise normal humans, and have a lifespan of 100 years or so.

As far as he is portrayed now, Kardilaz is closer to an Elemental in appearance. Genesi don't have rock skin, and they can't live up to 400 years. The only way Kardilaz could have survived the 200 year skip is by being immortal in some way or form, and if he were an Elemental, he would be far dumber than he is right now.

Even if he was an Elemental, I don't think the city watch would feel comfortable with him tromping around within city limits. Furthermore, an elemental (especially a rock / earth one) makes for one hell of a tank. I don't think there's a character around at the moment who could beat Kardilaz short of one of the special characters.

I'm not sure which direction you want to go, but this will need to be modified to be lore accurate before we go any further. It might be best to start with a new character.

If you want to modify this one, could you split the backstory into paragraphs? Block of text hurts my eyes.

Pat wrote:

And then there was Kardilaz again >_>

I don't know if you remember last time, but the last time you reapplied for this character I informed you of the difference between an Elemental and a Genesi.

If you don't remember, Elementals are immortal creatures, made of their element, with great power over their element but rudimentary, animal intelligence. Genesi are mortals (usually humans) born with a natural affinity for one or another element. They can control their element without prior training, but do need experience and teaching to grow in their skill, and are usually less immediately powerful than Genesi. They are otherwise normal humans, and have a lifespan of 100 years or so.

As far as he is portrayed now, Kardilaz is closer to an Elemental in appearance. Genesi don't have rock skin, and they can't live up to 400 years. The only way Kardilaz could have survived the 200 year skip is by being immortal in some way or form, and if he were an Elemental, he would be far dumber than he is right now.

Even if he was an Elemental, I don't think the city watch would feel comfortable with him tromping around within city limits. Furthermore, an elemental (especially a rock / earth one) makes for one hell of a tank. I don't think there's a character around at the moment who could beat Kardilaz short of one of the special characters.

I'm not sure which direction you want to go, but this will need to be modified to be lore accurate before we go any further. It might be best to start with a new character.

If you want to modify this one, could you split the backstory into paragraphs? Block of text hurts my eyes.

Well from my original understanding of the race, they WERE rock and their hair if they had any were diamonds. The original Kard was not any similar to a human due to the fact he was alot taller back then and he looks the exact same here. I also tried my best for him not to actually seem like a tank. As for the age I guess I'm sorry in some way? I can try and work something out when it comes to that... Also I fixed the paragraph situation.

At the risk of sounding close-minded, I am obliged to deny this outright for a few reasons.

The main issue is that this character received a overwhelmingly negative response regarding how it was roleplayed, and was to be condemned as a response. Alongside this, one of the reasons there was a 200 year jump was to get a fresh start on characters, since there were way too many characters out of control. Like Richard Crimson.

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Large scale things such as, splitting open a large portion of the ground, tossing a large chunk of earth, ect. Can only be done once to twice a day, depending on how large of a scale it is.

TWICE a day? Jesus.

Also what Pat and Psyche said.

Also I don't trust how he was played before.

man, just make a new character

it's not that hard

Suddenly, my format. My format everywhere.

Also, diamonds.

I don't use your format! Anyway, I can live with old characters that lived long enough to make RARE, SPECIAL appearances, but the point of even going through with the jump was to start from scratch. No matter how you look at it, Kardilaz is a part of the past and if he's survived this long, he's going to be a cut above the rest. Like, a really big cut above the rest.

Kain wrote:

I don't use your format! Anyway, I can live with old characters that lived long enough to make RARE, SPECIAL appearances, but the point of even going through with the jump was to start from scratch. No matter how you look at it, Kardilaz is a part of the past and if he's survived this long, he's going to be a cut above the rest. Like, a really big cut above the rest.

Assuming he wasn't a gargantuan, city-sized cut above the rest 200 years prior.

DENY
i didnt really like kard in the last gen because he was pretty much just a big op'd rock
in all technicality, you should just fucking toss him and at least attempt to make a new character like everyone else

PuPeT-KaI wrote:

DENY
i didnt really like kard in the last gen because he was pretty much just a big op'd rock
in all technicality, you should just fucking toss him and at least attempt to make a new character like everyone else

This is a very blunt statement, but I have to agree with it entirely, and throw in my deny, too.

Deny

Not because of anything I see particularly wrong with the app, but no one can really fight a rock, really, you'd be the ace in the hole for every fight.

Scrapping Kard, got a better idea