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PostSubject: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 12:02 am

Themesong:Two steps from Hell- Global waste

Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Cakebr10
Picture of Cakebread with his MW plate Armour+1 and greatswort


Age:30
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Birthplace:The Hamlet Thirodin in the Sword Coast
Class:Paladin
Current level: 2 at 1275/3000 exp


Stats:
Melee, devoted to mainly Swords and Polearms but can use other types of weapons if needed.
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Firearms, No practice at all with them.
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Magic, has no practice in it at but is willing to learn a bit.
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Ability score
Strength: 16
Constitution: 14
Dexterity: 14
Intellect: 9
Wisdom: 12
Charisma: 12

Ability Modifiers

Strength: +3
Constitution: +2
Dexterity: +2
Intellect: -1
Wisdom: +1
Charisma: +1

Total hitpoints:39
Armor Class: 21 = 10 +9 [Plate] +2 [dexterity]

Current equipment
Tabard
+1 Full plate
Short sword
Cudgel
Great sword
[url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spetum
]Spetum[/url]

Weapon combos
Greatswort, cudgel, short swort
Spetum, short swort

More DnD stats I made with a 3.5 char gen


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Rest of skills: To do, will do




Biography:

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ACHIEVEMENTS!!!

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Alignment:Lawful Good, tilts to Chaotic good when friends are in danger.
Favored Enemy:Criminals that can be punished
Favored Weapon:Balanced Long Swords
Deity:Tyr-God of Justice

Current Tasks:
As his secret identity, Dwoust Shelfwood, help the goblin people
Use his secret Identity to help the good people of surna
Find someone to craft piece of armour with the worn chitin he gutted from his hunting trip.
Obtain inspiring armour and equipment so that people will follow the light of Tyr or at least be lawfully good.




Completed Tasks:
Make some friends, get some connections.
Get a good place to stay and a good supporting job.
Get some new equipment, this short swort is wearing out.

Failed Tasks:Run away without causing attention.
Eternal Tasks:
Pray for forgivness to Tyr for the horrible deeds i can't recall.
Follow the lessons of Tyr
Go paladin on people


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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 12:18 am

No offense, but I have literally no idea what I just read.

Sausage Men? Exploding Cigars?

From what I caught, he's meant to come from the setting of Dark Espadon's Fantasy Roleplay? If that's the case, I'll stop you right there. Outside the context of speculative stories or joke characters, we don't allow characters to cross over (literally, not using the character you used elsewhere here) from other fiction, fandom, or roleplays.

Beyond that, I'm -really- not sure what to make of the rest of this. Some elaboration would be very welcome.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 12:21 am

Pat wrote:
No offense, but I have literally no idea what I just read.

Sausage Men? Exploding Cigars?

From what I caught, he's meant to come from the setting of Dark Espadon's Fantasy Roleplay? If that's the case, I'll stop you right there. Outside the context of speculative stories or joke characters, we don't allow characters to cross over (literally, not using the character you used elsewhere here) from other fiction, fandom, or roleplays.

COUGHCOUGHZAYLCOUGHCOUGH
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 12:24 am

Rutabega wrote:
Pat wrote:
No offense, but I have literally no idea what I just read.

Sausage Men? Exploding Cigars?

From what I caught, he's meant to come from the setting of Dark Espadon's Fantasy Roleplay? If that's the case, I'll stop you right there. Outside the context of speculative stories or joke characters, we don't allow characters to cross over (literally, not using the character you used elsewhere here) from other fiction, fandom, or roleplays.

COUGHCOUGHZAYLCOUGHCOUGH


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(literally, not using the character you used elsewhere here)

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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 3:02 pm

i have some bad news for you, deven.

in this universe, the sausage man has limitless power

the sausage man is kain
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 4:49 pm

Pat wrote:


From what I caught, he's meant to come from the setting of Dark Espadon's Fantasy Roleplay? If that's the case, I'll stop you right there. Outside the context of speculative stories or joke characters, we don't allow characters to cross over (literally, not using the character you used elsewhere here) from other fiction, fandom, or roleplays.

Beyond that, I'm -really- not sure what to make of the rest of this. Some elaboration would be very welcome.

Well i was sorta heading towards Cakebread being some what confused and unsure of where he came from, he has doubts that he is from a different "Realm" and that maybe he's just has amnesia and a very odd augmented collection of memory. I was making him set up to be lost, confused, and very scared of many things. I know pulling things from other lore's is unkosher but seeing as it would make a very interesting base for memories and reaction/thought guide I decided to pitch it in.

The idea that you don't know where you are and who you are exactly was kind of my thesis for his background.
If the community decides its not kosher then I'll just go to my other background idea.


Note: I posted that incomplete since i had to abruptly leave, was gonna touch it up more to make legit.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeFri Jan 13, 2012 5:36 pm

Just a word of advice, as much as the two short stories add to the feeling of confusion that the character must feel, I would suggest a drier, more factual back-story. Also, the character's history past his sudden appearance in Surna, try to lay down your assertions first, then add flavor, but that's just my opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 12:09 am

Update, I have revised and editted the background, waiting for more opinions and statements of current condition.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:18 pm

Bump, I have changed the background alot and I'm sorta getting sucked into the abyss of oblivion.

Better late than pregnant guys?Guise?
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:19 pm

Is the sword coast a place in aeria, or something you made up?
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:24 pm

Wait, so he travelled across to Aeria from the DERP setting?

...are you mad bro
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:28 pm

Krug wrote:
Wait, so he travelled across to Aeria from the DERP setting?

...are you mad bro

And his surname is "Cakebread".

This needs a lot of work.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:32 pm

B3SERK wrote:
Is the sword coast a place in aeria, or something you made up?

I found a coast on the Aeria map, besides its not like you guys

Deven 'Beef' Cakebread MapOfOldenland_3-27-3-1-1-1-1-1

Krug wrote:
Wait, so he travelled across to Aeria from the DERP setting?

...are you mad bro

I actually changed that part from universe hoppin to memory changing so ya.
Also I had a great time on DERP as Cigarman versus the criminal Sausage man.

I was the hero that community deserved.

And so what if i use Cakebread as a surname?
Its a great name, theres a Cakebread Wine family in cali
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:38 pm

But it still talks about Ashory- I... I don't get it man.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:42 pm

I think everyone can agree that there should be no DERP references whatsoever with this character, also while the surname "Cakebread" is strange, it's not totally out of the question, people do have strange last names sometimes.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 4:47 pm

Krug wrote:
But it still talks about Ashory- I... I don't get it man.

Well basicly K'chorne wanted to make Cakebread the perfect undoubtling hired blade who won't go against his orders no matter what.

K'chorne made a spell that would replace his memory with a story which would have make him easier to convert back instead of just upright bribeing him or blackmailing him.
It needed a spell that would help reinforce the story and the mage accidentally made the a big ass fireball.

Everything about Ashory is just a made up story by K'chorne.
No universe hopping at all.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 5:00 pm

I'd say you keep the surname, gives the character an oddity. But really you can't have a crossover character. This is an entirely different universe, a more serious one at that.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 5:16 pm

Gambit wrote:
I'd say you keep the surname, gives the character an oddity. But really you can't have a crossover character. This is an entirely different universe, a more serious one at that.

There is no universe hopping at all, I've completely replaced it with a memory change.
All refrences to Ashory in the background is just a made up story used by K'chorne to convert Cakebread.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 5:38 pm

I know I was just stating something, but your change could prove interesting in the future.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeSun Jan 15, 2012 9:44 pm

Slowly drifting back into the abyss, Mfw
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeMon Jan 16, 2012 10:24 am

Well, I suppose this makes sense, and it is a first character-

Why not, I'll toss this my accept. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeMon Jan 16, 2012 5:51 pm

Looks good enough, the above picture creeps the fuck out of me but accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeMon Jan 16, 2012 5:53 pm

For what it's worth, here's my accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeTue Jan 17, 2012 11:00 pm

This is a different criticism totally unrelated to true RP, but I think the skills may be a little high. I can safely assume you rolled for them, so I'm not blaming you personally, I just think in Olden, using DnD only really works if new characters start with low-power stats.
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PostSubject: Re: Deven 'Beef' Cakebread   Deven 'Beef' Cakebread Icon_minitimeTue Jan 17, 2012 11:09 pm

Psycheandromida wrote:
This is a different criticism totally unrelated to true RP, but I think the skills may be a little high. I can safely assume you rolled for them, so I'm not blaming you personally, I just think in Olden, using DnD only really works if new characters start with low-power stats.

Ya, i had them rolled in Baldur's gate two, but they don't apply to anything aside from the dnd use in fights.

In rp, he wouldn't be strong as a bull or anything just a well muscled man so he couldn't do any feats of strength like pushing 1000lb rocks.

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