Evangeline Melwasúl

Sorry for the shitty story :C

It certainly looks charming as it is now, but I really do think that the biography could've been made better.

Can't blame you for it though, I suck at biographies myself. :v

I like it. I like the way you've gone about presenting your page, too.

I don't see why this shouldn't be accepted.

It's a summarised biography but it still outlines why she has her skills, how she ended up coming across Surna. I say that's a very acceptable approach to it.

My approvals.

How good is she with a bow? What kind of accuracy does she maintain at 20 yards, 50, 100, etc.

It would be interesting to see how she adapts to a civilized setting. Anyways, while the bio is sparse, it's also to the point, so I can't complain. Like thoro, I must ask, how much of a "sharpshooter" is she?

Change alchemist to uh. She basically just knows how to mix certain natural ingredients for small beneficial or negative remedies. Ones that can help you overcome a small illness a little faster, or one that can cause you to hallucinate (damn you nature). The only downside to knowing all of this, is Surna most likely has ... Almost nothing that Sarkun had. I'm not sure how I confused it with alchemy but oh well.

On archery:

I'm not entirely sure what's OP and what isn't in archery so I'll see what you think of; She's great at a distance (apparently 50 meters is good), but typically cannot hit a moving target. If she's around 15-20 meters and under, she can use simple prediction to attempt to hit you, but still of course may still miss. However, the bow and arrow aren't exactly the choice weapon if someone is in your face, so she carries a dagger, although it's a small, crude, hand-made dagger. Although she knows how to defend herself, someone that knows melee even semi-well could overpower her easily.

And for the story, I'm "OKAY" with stories, but last time I played olden was 2 years or so ago, and apparently a lot has changed as well. That and I made it at 5am again. Sorry about that Aside from that, if any of this seems OP (no clue if it does), then I can happily lower it.

Well, looks fine to me. Accepted.

The picture makes me believe felony 3 will be committed is cool.

"The picture makes me believe felony 3 will be committed is cool."

I have no clue what that means.. D:

The middle part was meant to be hidden.

He basically said you're gonna get stalkers.

Anyway, looks good. Bio is very minimalist, but okay, it gets the job done.

Accept

Lol wakfu?

Evangelyne
A 17-year-old Cra, Evangelyne is accompanying the Sadida princess Amalia as a bodyguard. She is committed to her job, but also acts as an older sister to the young Amalia. She wields a bow that can fire a variety of magic arrows, making a quiver unnecessary. Though at first she shows no attraction to Tristepin at the beginning and immune to his constant flirting, it is obvious he is starting to grow on her, yet she constantly denies such feelings exist.

Oh I see now, but no they're not really related.

I'm going to accept this.

Unless anybody objects I'll probably redo her char page since it's terrible, and since tinypic blurred everything as well. I'll probably keep her data the same except the bio I may redo. Same details, but not as shitty (but still shitty).

Void this character.