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PostSubject: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeMon Jan 16, 2012 3:25 pm

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Backstory
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Physical Description
Rayhon has black, unkept hair down to the middle of his neck, with a black beard connecting to sideburns and a moustache. He is nearly always wearing his black blindfold aswell as a specially designed curiass, a simple cloth shirt with some leather patches sewn in around the most vulnerable areas, his trousers are similarly designed. His build would be noticed as skinnier then average, but still slightly muscular.

Alignment
Lawful Good - Rayhon has overcome his selfish attitude. He is determined to right the wrongs of the world, or, at the very least live peacefully, helping out where he can. He has a very calm attitude and voice, due to his meditation and is slow to anger.

Skills


0-2 skill points: Novice level
3-5 skill points: Apprentice level
6-8 skill points: Journeyman level
9 skill points: Expert level
10 skill points: Master (Thanks Gambit)



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Attributes

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Inventory


x1 Dorati Curiass - A regular cloth shirt with leather patches sewn in, this allows for some protection aswell as maximum flexiblity
x1 Dorati Greeves - Similar design to the curiass
x2 Bandage-Fingerless gloves - Cloth wrapped around the hands to protect them from constant wear, while still allowing for unsoftened damage
x2 Leather shoes
x25 Gold pieces
x1 Black blindfold
x1 Rucksack
Various small amounts of food
x1 Water skin

Deity
Tyr - The God of Justice Tyr is the main deity worshipped by the Dorati temple, though the beliefs are not forced on initiates, Rayhon chose to follow in the worship.

OOC Note:
My character application for the new age, I did make up alot of the stuff in the backstory though I did try to make it fit, if there are any problems with the page at all please tell me. I intend to add a themesong and picture when I can find something that fits.


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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeMon Jan 16, 2012 5:50 pm

Scale Reference:
0-2 skill points: Novice level
3-5 skill points: Apprentice level
6-8 skill points: Journeyman level
9 skill points: Expert level
10 skill points: Master

You will need a scale so Psyche and Mun don't come get you, here you go.
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeTue Jan 17, 2012 6:47 am

Gambit is a bro.
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeTue Jan 17, 2012 2:44 pm

His skills are slightly high, but I'd accept him otherwise. What's the worst he could do?
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeTue Jan 17, 2012 4:43 pm

Seems ok, I suppose

But, I don't see why he has to meditate to throw harder punches. Wouldn't it make more sense if he was moderately skilled in unarmed combat all the time, and just meditated each day anyways?
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeWed Jan 18, 2012 1:21 am

I'd actually prefer if it was like that, but I was worried people might have complained. I'll edit it later with the changes you suggested Psych.
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeWed Jan 18, 2012 2:17 am

Jack wrote:
His skills are slightly high, but I'd accept him otherwise. What's the worst he could do?

Likewise in agreement, here.

Still rofl at echolocation. So wonderfully weird.
NO I WILL NOT GO TO BED
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeWed Jan 18, 2012 2:19 am

If his meditated strike and unmeditated strike have the same "Skill level" why bother putting two?
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeWed Jan 18, 2012 2:37 am

Removed unarmed combat, edited skill descriptions as per suggestions.
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeWed Jan 18, 2012 2:01 pm

Doesn't seem bad, I
Believe I'll accept. (also, I had a mini-heart attack when I first saw this thread, I thought it was Col Star)
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeThu Jan 19, 2012 9:03 am

Give it a go.
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeThu Jan 19, 2012 10:05 am

And a community accept from me too. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeThu Jan 19, 2012 11:11 am

get out col you faggot kill yourself
Accep
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PostSubject: Re: Rayhon Oldogar   Rayhon Oldogar Icon_minitimeThu Jan 19, 2012 12:07 pm

I deem this approved.
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