Noris
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| Subject: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Thu Jan 19, 2012 2:39 pm | |
| Themesong: Preußens Gloria - Johann Gottfried Piefke (Forum stuff won't allow me to post stuff) Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1Age:39 Gender:Male Race:Human Birthplace:Occitan regions. Skill: Swordplay; Being a self-proclaimed Knight, Jurgen took pride in his ability to use a sword. Though he doesn't have one made out of anything besides wood, he is still a formidable opponent if the situation deems necessary. Biography: - Spoiler:
Jurgen Cobbald was born of Occitan decent, said to be from the Blacksteel sons. Of course, this was his great grandparents, and not him. The blood still ran in him, however. He was native to the Nation-state of Ansbach, but his family migrated to the Buchloe when he was three years old. He remembers little about his birth land, if anything at all. He remembers his mother spoon-feeding him sweet honey from flowers in that province, and spoon-feeding is a thing has been regarded as an act of love in his eyes. He grew up impoverished, however, and was required to fend for himself multiple times against bullies. Through that, he gained a natural aptitude for combat and survival. He grew up a street urchin, hoping for the day that someone would save him. That day would eventually come, but it wouldn't be someone else saving him.
What happened to save hm was an ideal that was being cultivated as he watched the Knights of the city do their training. He admired them, and that admiration rubbed off as he soon found himself mimicking their daily trainings with small branches from the trees outside the city. He would spend day after day observing the technique that they practiced, and put it in to practice himself as soon as he believed that he had memorized each step, and every swivel of a muscle. He would spend nights without sleep practicing these swings and skills that made the knights so gloriously appealing to him. His body became toned and tan as he toiled over the hot sun day after day.
Young Jurgen was missing something, however. He did not partake in the daily disciplines that the Knights held, keeping them steady and stalwart. He was immature in those natures that truly made one a knight; and he was oblivious to the fact. He held almost no formal education, only knowing what he learned in the streets and what little his parents told him. Eventually he would find his own training and tutoring, but it would not be until he later years in the Occitan states. When he was eighteen, he enlisted in the local guard force. He swiftly rose through the ranks, showing excellent prowess for battle and policing of the town he lived in. Within a year, he rose to the Captain of the guard after a riot killed the former. His duty term was short lived when a slip of duty took everything away from him.
After the town was razed on his fault, Jurgen went into self exile. He honed his skills along the way, but he never had received proper knighthood rites. He proclaimed himself to be a knight, but he never actually became one. It is still his dream to become one, and it has been years since he's settled down in a single town. He's simply a drifter, moving from town to town and doing virtuous deeds whenever the situation calls for it, as a way to redeem himself. Alignment: Neutral: GoodFavored Enemy: N/A Favored Weapon: Broadsword Deity: Minor worship of Strauss Current Task: To reclaim his honor; finding himself along the way. Picture:N/A (when I find one)
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Krug
Posts : 1397 Join date : 2010-01-20 Age : 31 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:38 pm | |
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Noris
Posts : 9 Join date : 2012-01-17
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:44 pm | |
| Shit, forgot to read that part. My bad, I'll fix it. | |
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Pat Loremaster
Posts : 1299 Join date : 2009-02-15
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| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Fri Jan 20, 2012 4:54 pm | |
| I like this character, and the fact that some obvious research went into this, which is always a good point in my eyes. Apparently his only skill is with the sword, and he only has a wood one at that.
I only have a few questions. His backstory is apparently missing how exactly his mistake resulted in the town being razed - and who or what did the razing. While it's not really a huge issue, (you could always choose to have who and how be something to figure out ICly, by other characters or even yourself) I just though I'd point that out.
The other point is the question of how he ended up in Surna in the first place, given Surna is many miles south of the Occitanian nation-states.
Regardless, I'm willing to Accept this, barring any further issues. | |
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Noris
Posts : 9 Join date : 2012-01-17
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:45 pm | |
| To clarify -
I don't like revealing certain things about my characters in OOC back-stories due to the element of "Wow, what" sort of taken away from an OOC standpoint. If you want me, I can add in how that happened.
And two, once the town he was apart of was razed, he migrated south slowly, hoping to find homage in other lands. | |
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Kain
Posts : 1427 Join date : 2009-03-24 Location : Somewhere Pat doesn't want me to be
Character sheet Name: Kain Redwell Age: ??? Race: Human (?)
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:48 pm | |
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Kain
Posts : 1427 Join date : 2009-03-24 Location : Somewhere Pat doesn't want me to be
Character sheet Name: Kain Redwell Age: ??? Race: Human (?)
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:49 pm | |
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Krug
Posts : 1397 Join date : 2010-01-20 Age : 31 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:58 pm | |
| - Kain wrote:
- Krug also accepts.
Sure, why not? <3 | |
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Markka Moderator
Posts : 916 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 31
Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
| Subject: Re: Jurgen Cobbald - Knight of 1 Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:11 am | |
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