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Like my other works, this will be episodic.
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this story

this story the best story
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Loved it, the writing style reminds me of those 1930ties film noir movies.
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Pat. Pat never changes.
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Kain wrote:
Pat. Pat never changes.

what does that mean
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Pat wrote:
Kain wrote:
Pat. Pat never changes.

what does that mean

it means, pat, that you are a book that i have read and reread, and the content is always the same. ALWAYS.

anyway, back to relevant posts aka THE STORY. i enjoy writin dis, even if no one but pat reads it, sniffing every word for some trace of Vorn's mentioning.
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I usually don't read stories, but when I do, they're quality.
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Markka wrote:
I usually don't read stories, but when I do, they're quality.

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Stay thirsty, my friends.
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This latest one was a bit late, my apologies. Had some bumps get in the way, today.
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Loving the story so far, man.
SURNA HIGH-TIER LENGTH INBOUND
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Very awesome, I always find myself copping out on journals like this before I ever take them anywhere - you've got my respect for sticking with this. Smile
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"why should anyone care about money"

because money gets you BITCHES




But yeah, well written and interesting as always
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I like the social commentary and how it refers to the old age. Makes it a much more glamorous and honorable sounding time then it really was.
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It will all build up to a conclusion, unlike Surna High, which has length infinite.
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Kain wrote:
ISurna High, which has length infinite.

Speaking of which...
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No, not resuming it yet. There are chapters written down but I'm not up to it yet. SH chapters take s long ass time to complete, a lot of planning, and forethought. Sorry Root, but its on the backburner.


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I wish I've seen the showdown between y'all and the black hawks.
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Alec and Ganelon were the only hunters present, and Gan got there when it was over.

That said, it was quite exciting.
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Kain wrote:
Alec and Ganelon were the only hunters present, and Gan got there when it was over.

That said, it was quite exciting.

Why do the armless people always miss on all the fun? 'Tis discriminatin'.
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I appear to miss most of what happens on the server. Damn Americunts.
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