Deruek -

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Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Furothian
Birthplace: Furothian
Skill: Furothians have increased agility and intelligence. Their heads seem to be curved, curving backwards, the brain extending, although the skull is softer as as common skull. Their short, stalky bodies allow them to run faster. They aren't humans, although humanoid, and looking human, they are not. They have an increased concentration aswell, their race is known for magic harnessing, although few have it, and the few who do, are very powerful. This increased concentration allows further aim in ranged weaponry, a lot of Furtothians are experts in bows.

Biography:
Deruek was born at an unspecified time, the location being temple of Forthwind, his mother dying at birth, his father took him as his own. His father, being the priest of the temple, decided that he shall grow to study the Archia. The Archia is the biblical study for Sul Selderine. Through his early years, he was taken care of gently, his father not being a warrior, nor wanting to be, he treated him softly. He took into consideration that a warrior shall be treaten rough, a scholar treaten easily. He was sent to school for four years in writing and reading at age eight. Many of the people around him being idiotic and unfaithful, his father; being the priest, was able to kill all men if thought to be heretics. Deruek was considered royalty, as faith was royal at that age. Deruek took in hand, that if he wanted someone dead, they could be killed, by his own will. By age 10, early in his studies, he knew how to read and write to a minor degree, he would make posters advertising the temple. By age 11, he learned how to read, mainly, the alphabet of 212 words, being the most complicated language known to their age, he was lucky. Most of the citizens in his town not knowing how to read, he considered himself special. By age 12, he went to a university in Archial studies, learning the scriptures from ground up. It took him a small year to learn it, already being top in his schoolings. His father and him very well knew that he could be a priest in his studies, but knew that he didn't want to. Although he was undyingly loyal to his faith, he didn't like it. He took a year in the war-academy. He decided he would insist that others believe. By age 14, he was considered a Templar for his duties. After he graduated, he was given a mission to be a missionary for the new region. He was given a small cutlass, a flintlock pistol, small steel sword, and light chainmail. He arrived in the town, many people were quite rude to him. He decides he should prove to them who he is. He leaves the town and goes back to his boat in search of his equipment. He thinks that it may be stolen... He reaches the boat, looking down into it....
Alignment: Holy;Evil
Favored Enemy:Heretics of Sul Selderine.
Favored Weapon: Flintlock Weaponry.
Deity: Cybylus.
Current Task: Establish a temple in the town.
Cleanse the town of current faith.
Kill the heretics if they shall resist.

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Age: 15

nope

What's wrong with it, I'm basing it on that time, 15 was considered adult.

Krug wrote:

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Age: 15

nope

Among other things that people more well versed are sure to bring up.

Terracotta wrote:

What's wrong with it, I'm basing it on that time, 15 was considered adult.

In Aeria time, we're different from medieval.

15 is not an adult. At all. No. Noooo. Never. Never, ever. No. Noooooooo. No. NEVER.

Also what is this, some pimply highschooler purging the town?

Also did you invent that race?

No offence of course.

poni

The youngest king was eight months old. Henry V1,

In medieval era, most warriors were warriors around age 14-23, today, 15 year olds are pimply highschoolers. Most highschoolers don't spend most of their days training and spending most of their time doing such as someone may in that era of time.

Also, yes, I did create the race.

If it is SO much of an issue, I will change the times to him being 21, if it annoys you so much.

Aeria's timeline and history and setting, it's all different from medieval. Very much so.

15 is a kiddy widdling in our setting, so, you might have to change it. Of course you will change it right now god damnit

I don't see the point in changing any events or timelines, just expand studying times and things, he's 21 today.

I'm afraid you can't just create custom races and countries for your character. Aside from the fact that none of this has a proper lore page, if the admins allowed everyone to do it, there'd be bazillions of them. You have to stick with what we have.

http://aeria.omgforum.net/f36-races

http://aeria.omgforum.net/f68-areas-in-aeria

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Favored Enemy:Heretics of Sul Selderine.
Favored Weapon: Flintlock Weaponry.
Deity: Cybylus.

We don't have flintlock weaponry, there's no one called Sul Selderine, and there's no deity named Cybylus.

Munroe wrote:

I'm afraid you can't just create custom races and countries for your character. Aside from the fact that none of this has a proper lore page, if the admins allowed everyone to do it, there'd be bazillions of them. You have to stick with what we have.

Aeria would then turn into Faerun and we would be living in Sembia.

This entire page is wrong.

/twitch.
That avatar.
/twiiitch.
And eh, most of the issues have been stated.

If you can't be bothered to make an app for a new religion/deity, you could always make it so that he's the only member of the religion and he's just some drug addict/madman wandering the lands trying to pedal his made up religion to anyone who'll listen.

I'm basing it on my own vision on religion, although this is fantasy and deities do exist, I am basing that he isn't a drug addict or a madman, he simply comes from a culture based on that religion.

Even so, you'll have to get all this looked at by Pat, or someone.

Allowing player created lore without some kind of approval process has proven to be nothing short of suicidal.

Krug wrote:

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Age: 15

nope

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Favored Weapon: Flintlock Weaponry.

nope

doesn't exist

There's a reason I created this applicaiton and didn't just make the character all in it's own...

What it seems to be, to me, is that you don't realize that even though this is fantasy, you can't just do whatever you want. We are in a specific timeline in a specific place, not when and where you wish to be. Want to change that? Talk to an admin, write some sort of lore about it, don't just prance around thinking you are the boss and make the rules. You don't.

There aren't flintlocks, just because you want them.
There aren't 'furothians', or 'Cybylus', or a 'Sul Selderine' religion, just because you made them up.
This is a community where things needed to be applied and talked about for, not just made on the get-go. If you don't like that, get out, because you can't handle the simple fact that this is not some sort of magical world where everything you want happens, and that there is already stuff in place for you to use and follow.

There's no need to get hostile, PuPeT.

As I've already explained, we're not able to allow new lore and races to be spontaneously created for the sake of one character. Things would rapidly become confusing if that were the case, as there'd be nothing stopping anyone from making a new race and associated area / culture for each character. Aeria's a finite world.

I'm not against your character having some new deity, so long as there's some plausible explanation as to how and why this deity is worshiped. Regardless, you should use the races and places already established as canon.

Munroe wrote:

I'm not against your character having some new deity, so long as there's some plausible explanation as to how and why this deity is worshiped. Regardless, you should use the races and places already established as canon.

Words of wisdom.

You can't go wrong if you stick to what's written.

I think there's nothing wrong with making up new deities and countries and whatnot as long as they're all well thought out and applied for properly.

Assuming it's naturally okay to just make a character using a bunch of things that don't exist and naturally assuming it's ok isn't, really.

For what my opinion's worth, i think this would be an okay character (now he's not 15 anymore, at least. seriously, why do people make characters so young then give them big important jobs and think that's ok) providing everything like race + religion and stuff are applied for, if he really REALLY wants them.

But judging from how hard getting player made lore implemented seems to be it's probably not worth the effort.

Kali wrote:

now he's not 15 anymore, at least. seriously, why do people make characters so young then give them big important jobs and think that's ok

He did have a point about the age. 16 is a decent age for a warrior, albeit an unskilled one, assuming the culture mirrors real world culture.

Yeah, but sending a 15 year old far away from his homeland to preach the religion of his people seems a bit iffy.