Marcus Johnson

I really like this. :3

He seems good with fighting.
Too good.
*Shifty stare*

While they may be his only skills, I'd too say that the skills feel a bit high for a guy that's 21 years old.

I see what you mean, although don't go by the skill bars. People started using them for character pages suddenly, so I tossed them in for effect, like with Cleophee. I never stick by them though, they seem to be exaggerations for me, to say "okay he can fight, and he's good with these skills." Once in server though, I'll still get my ass kicked most likely (by Kain).

I don't think skill bars appeared "suddenly", to be frank. They've been around for almost two years. That said, skill bars tend to be relative and somewhat flexible since there is no actual uniform system to base the bars upon. The bars do not mean a lot only by themselves, but in addition to verbal explanation, they can be used quite well to gauge a character's skill in X thing.

With that out of the way, I do still feel they're sort've high. He's nearly a master in both fighting with swords and unarmed, both of which are somewhat broad and general. And if you "just tossed them in there" and never intend to go by them, don't even bother to use them.

I worked on this for a few hours, and I kept redoing his bio until it was at least somewhat reasonable. When I was finally writing the actual page here, it was about 5am. Anyway, with that said, tell me what you want the bars lowered to and I can do it if absolutely necessary. They're meant to show those are his two primary skills and he's fairly good at them, but they're not meant to literally say he's near mastery (which he's far from). As for broad, I can drop in that second module on skills I did for Cleo explaining them further. By unarmed I mean if he finds himself without a weapon, he can make an attempt to handle himself against an armed opponent, attempting to avoid his swings and disable him or knock him out. For swords, I just mean he prefers swords (long, short, broad) over axes, bows, and so on.

As far as I'm able to decipher those bars, they'd around 8/10 in skill. That's pretty close to mastery. I'd appreciate if you bumped them down by a 'point' or two. It would also be a good thing if you could elaborate a bit on his skills. For all we know, he could be equally good with shortswords and massive greatswords.

Edited...

Well, alright. More elaborate than what I initially expected.

TRUE NEUTRAL?
NOT CHAOTIC
OR EBIL?

FUCKING SHIT MAN
HOLY
SHIT
accep

I haven't made any evil characters yet, lol..

Dragon wrote:

I haven't made any evil characters yet, lol..

i know
just talking about people
*cough*olden*cough*
cause good guys are obviously lame as shit

PuPeT-KaI wrote:

Dragon wrote:

I haven't made any evil characters yet, lol..

i know
just talking about people
*cough*olden*cough*
cause good guys are obviously lame as shit

We have plenty of good guys in Olden, what are you talking about?

Zaku wrote:

We have plenty of good guys in Olden, what are you talking about?

Spoiler:

either way i still accep this character so :\

Seems alright to me. Accept.

Moved.

Void this character.