Subject: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:53 am
Name: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja Race: Ijudi zi Džungla Aliases: Ogre (He doesn't like this name very much) Current Residence: Ogromna is a wanderer, so his position is not fixed. Though he does spend most his time in or around Turmalis. Faction: Ijudi Survival Organization Sub-faction: -Null- Birthplace: Velika zen Džungla Personality: Kind, Intelligent, Thoughtful, and always tries to make new friends. Age: Second Stage-952 years young Equipment: Five Large Med-Kits Weapon: A purchased Kha'laan Industries C-60 Hand Cannon. Weapon Name: "Stinger" How it was received: Ogromna purchased the Stinger for a relatively low price after aiding a trader being raided. Abilities:
Due to Ogromna's carapace, he has natural resistance towards blunt damage and is suited for long exposure in water. On the flip side, he has a natural weakness to heat and fire.
Since Ogromna is the only Ijudi who doesn't wear a body suit, this makes him the only Ijudi to produce food normally (As long as he is outside, he is never hungry).
Since Ogromna is a Zivotinja Clan member, his mental capacity and power exceeds over average. This allows him to be very good at at repairing things. When put to a point level, seven out of ten.
Ogromna's kind nature gives him very high charisma.
Biography:
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Born on the Ijudi home world Velika zen Džungla, Ogromna Zivotinja was to be the next heir of the Zivotinja throne. Shortly after 'The Posljednja Večer', Ogromna along with a few important clans were evacuated off Velika on the only Ijudi space fairing vessel manufactured, 'Prvi Let'. After the discovery of the destroyed human colony ship 'Geneva'. The parts from the ship were used to complete the final augmentations on the Prvi which was then named "The Prvi Gen Let". As the Prvi Gen Let searched solar systems for a suitable planet, it decided to orbit around the Eshira. After 100 years trying to decide of an invasion plan, Ogromna and two close friends took a small drop pod and set course to Eshira in order to not be involved with the violence. Ogromna (being a teenager at this point) assumed leadership of their small pack. In a horrible change of luck, the drop pod drifted of course and instead of landing in the luscious jungle area of Eshira, the small pack landed on the desert side. After wandering for several centuries and skipping from town to town, both of Ogromna's friends were killed by the very unusual disorder called Ukorjenjivanje or Ukorjen for short. Ogromna spent years suffering the loss of his friends and begged for him to also be killed by the Ukorjen. Ogromna went to many scientists trying to find out what was the reason Ukorjen formed in his friends. One scientist finally found an answer. Ukorjen is a disorder only found in the Ijudi. The disorder occurs due to lack of moisture in the Ijudi body. This scientist also discovered that there is a hereditary gene in Ogromna that gives him a permanent coating of slime, preventing him from suffering from Ukorjen. Ogromna decided that he wanted to return to The Prvi Gen Let. Selling the wreckage of his drop pod, he was able to afford a lift into space to drop him off on his ship. When he arrived on the Prvi Geni Let, he found all but one of the crew members killed. The only survivor was his once great father's royal servant. When Ogromna questioned the crew's fate in tears, the servant responded, "Before we left Velika, your father set a life bond on all the crew to you. Without you, we were meant to slowly die as a punishment of our failure to protect you. By running away from the Prvi, we all started to suffer and eventually we all began dropping like flies. There is no hope for me now. You are the last Ijudi left in the universe, but that might be changed. What I say might be strange but it is the only way for our species to live again...". Ogromna followed the servants instructions and brought all the crew members bodies back to Eshira. Ogromna placed all the bodies of the crew in a very large circle. Ogromna then said the prayer of re-seeding, "Za one koji su od nas, vratiti ih kao oblik veliko stablo života! (For the ones that have been taken from us, bring them back as the form of the great tree of life!)". The ground began to tremble and the bodies were sucked into the ground. Ogromna started to curse and then the roots of a might tree began to arise. The branches stretched hundreds of feet and it began to rise as high as the Great Tree Of Life one stood on Velika. Ogromna was shocked and then burst out into tears of joy. His people had been saved. Ogromna now wanders around Eshira as a nomad, making homes as he goes. His gentle and caring nature had led him to make many friends and allies. He tends to avoid conflict but when he gets into a mess, he knows how to defend himself. Being the only authority left for the Ijudi, he was immediately appointed ambassador for the Ijudi, Head of the council of decisions for the Ijudi Survival Organization, and General of the Tree Of Life Defense Force or TDF for short. Due to his rankings and achievements, most races avoid hostilities with him or give him respect.
Otherwise good, but I just find the toughness of these guys plus the helicopter a little iffy. More specifically
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The helicopter has a powerful armored plating capable of reflecting plasma, pulse, shrapnel, explosive, laser, gas, projectile, rock, and much more things that can be used to harm someone.
Could you please elaborate on this a little? How thick is the armor? How strong hits can it take? How many hits would be needed for the hull breach? How does the armor reflect all these, especially explosive, gas, projectile, rock, etc.? Not to be picky, but most of those could be deflected.
Also, how tough is Mudar's natural carapace?
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The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.
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Typically this helicopter can hold off around one-thousand anti-aircraft rounds without showing signs of damage.
I really hope that helicopter has no weaponry on it, because it would be one of the single most powerful things in the entire damn planet. Besides, all those luxuries and thick armor plating is sure to weight it by a -lot-, thus making it drink fuel like a thirsty camel.
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The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.
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Typically this helicopter can hold off around one-thousand anti-aircraft rounds without showing signs of damage.
This begs the question on how this person acquired more money than god to be able to not only apply these upgrades, but keep them on for more than three seconds.
Markka Moderator
Posts : 916 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 31
Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.
This makes no sense you realize, if you heated up armor enough for bullets to melt and separate before they do major damage, your helicopter itself would catch fire in it's wiring, fuel tank and other vital parts that need to be kept cool very quickly. Not to mention the armor would just liquify and fall off.
And seeing how that's not possible, the bullets would enter the armor extremely easier since it's softened up by being heated up.
And if somehow bullets did melt that quickly when being fired, they'd stick to the armor, melt, and merge into it, effectively weighing you down over time and making your helicopter unable to take off after you just soaked up a ton of projectile rounds.
Not to mention "Highly shined armor" doesn't reflect lazers and shit, it needs to be a special material. That's like saying you get your car a luxury cleaning and hand polish, and it can deflect all high tech alien weapons.
Weapons or not, this is a very powergame-y piece of work and needs to be edited appropriately.
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Keep in mind, Ogromna has saved many people from death and has also earned many life debts. Ogromna rarely asks for those debts but when he did in this case it was a major favor. He has made allies with military and mercenary groups so this allows him to get some equipment. Again, most of the money is provided as favors. The helicopter itself cost virtually nothing since it was all but destroyed. The misters on the inside of it are Ijudi plant life that naturally produce mist. The heavy armor plating was recovered by the many attempts to destroy The Tree Of Life. Pirates would try to burn it down using large hover-tanks only to be demolished by scolding blobs of plasma. Everything else was salvaged metal, equipment or scrap. Keep in mind that Ogromna is a leader of a race. With the titles he has he is very respected and will not have any problems acquiring money.
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By melting explosives I mean the tops of the warhead get fused to the helicopter without it detonating. Water jets will blast the explosives off the sides of the helicopter in mid-air. However, its not that every time a warhead fuses to the helicopter perfectly. There is a 74% chance of success while a 26% chance of the explosive detonating anyway. Usually the smaller explosives are the ones that detonate so the damage to the helicopter is minimal.
Markka Moderator
Posts : 916 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 31
Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
Doubt the helicopter will be very fast then, and it would be as easy to fly as a concrete block. As far as I know, helicopter usually aren't designed to be flying fortresses. You'd be far better off with a shield generator than a super-heavy armor plating, and the water tanks used to blast explosives and whatever else off would also weight quite literally a ton for the streams to be even remotely effective. As Blitz mentioned before, this helicopter seems really powergame-y.
Oh, and even if only the smaller explosives got through, the shockwaves would send this flying elephant rocking quite heavily.
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Blitz
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Okay, maybe you don't know anything about guns in real life, that's fine, so here's a run-down/
Bullets, unless they are actually made to do so, do not EXPLODE. Most bullets being your typical full metal jacket round, are made to enter a person's body, or a vehicle's hull, and cause damage using only kinetic force acquired from the propulsion of the weapon it came from, be it gas, power, whatever.
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I said explosive, not bullets. The bullets melt to the side and the explosives fuse to it. Bullets just become this liquidy mush that is easily cleaned off.
Blitz
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And seeing how that's not possible, the bullets would enter the armor extremely easier since it's softened up by being heated up.
And if somehow bullets did melt that quickly when being fired, they'd stick to the armor, melt, and merge into it, effectively weighing you down over time and making your helicopter unable to take off after you just soaked up a ton of projectile rounds.
Markka Moderator
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^ That. Even if the bullets melted, they would still do their damage before melting into the hull due to the kinetic energy. Now, if you try to say that they would melt BEFORE the impact, anyone inside of the chopper would be roast, and the helicopter itself would be just a puddle of molten metal and whatnot. Even if this was remotely possible, your helicopter would crash due to the extra weight.
Blitz
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How about i make the helicopter very fast, with a decent shield generator, and special flares that distract missiles and explosives. The purpose of the helicopter is basically to get the leader of the Ijudi out of a tight situation and keep him safe.
Markka Moderator
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Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
That sounds a lot better to me. A fast choppah that can used for quick getaways, rather than tanking fucktons of damage. Although, if the explosives aren't like guided missiles or seeking ones, they wouldn't be distracted by the flares, as they go straight forward pretty much.
Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:53 am
Name: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja
