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| Subject: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 5:49 pm | |
| ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~-Name- Rosalee Pulston
-Nickname- Rose
-Race- Human
-Gender- Female
-Age- 25
-Birthplace- Sida
-Alignment- True Neutral
-Diety- ---Rosalee is at the height of 5'8" and weighs around 110 lbs, rather slender. Her eyes are brown along with her hair, which comes down just an inch or two past her elbows and it is appears to be groomed well. Her skin is a bit dark, very tanned considering where she lives. Rosa is mostly found in exotic clothing, found with jewerly on most of the time aswell.Two words that might define Rosalee is greedy and selfish. If she wants something, she always tries to get it but atleast not in a harsh manner at first, one of her common ways of getting something is coercion, using her persuasion. She can be found to be a rather lazy person, reason why she has so many servants to do everything for her. Although she might be greedy, rude, and selfish, she still is a human and feels for others. Basically she'd offer help to one who is near death and such.-Persuasion-Rosalee does a lot of negotations when she is out working and has found ways to be rather persuasive after being taught over multiple years. - Quote :
- Rosalee was born into a wealthy family, her father managing over a somewhat secret operation that involved selling supplies to groups of bandits, which was where his main income came from. It was hard to keep track of where Rosalee was specifically born, her parents moved among the multiple houses they owned so it she was just generally born in Sida. Rosa was born a single child, of which only came worse when her mother disappeared months after she was born so she never really got to see her own mother. Rosa's personality developped off her father's slightly, becoming greedy and somewhat rude to those ranked below her though her father was always busy and away so she wasn't effected as much.
~~~ While growing up, she was mostly occupied with recieving an education from a private teacher and with the spare time she amused herself by doing various things to her personal servant. She had numerous servants that took care of either her meals, bedroom, or wardrobe though her personal servant stuck near her side throughout the day almost entirely. Approaching age sixteen, her father finally decided to include her in his work as she neared the end of her education. This was a chance for her to actually talk to her father more often, but later on she found out she would become a negotiator for him.
~~~ Sixteen all the way up to twenty-three, Rosa served as a negotiator to offer newer groups of bandits to the trade, though trade wasn't too large so she'd only have to travel once a month or so to meet a new group. She was rather horrible at persuading as she first started, though she built up over the many years which offered much practice and training. Three months after Rosa had turned twenty-three, her father passed away from an illness. Her father was in his fifties though he looked more so in his eighties considering his job stressed him so much from the beginning and building it up so on. Weeks just before his death he was already feeling terrible, and at the time all the personal doctor did was try to put him in comfort.
~~~ You would think she would be one to mourn her own father's death, though she only was filled with little sadness. Her father barely even spoke to her for a first, and the song of joy played in her head when she thought of inheritance, only showing how greedy and selfish she can be. Even though negotiating wasn't pleasant to Rosa she continued doing it just for a little time longer, figuring she could hire someone to do it for her later on.
~~~ Currently she has headed to Surna, hearing of a group of bandits formed by a man named Scars. Reviewing over information, she thought to pay a visit to make a business deal but at the same time had the thought of settling down for once in her life, just as a small/permenant break. Wardrobe (Contains numerous dresses) Multiple Jewerly Pieces People [x3] Servant [x] Personal Servant [x] Doctor [x4] BodyguardsCompleted / Ongoing / Failed / Eternal(~) Find Scars and negotiate "Time to get another group over with..." (~) Plan on wether to stay or not "Not going to be travelling around for the rest of my life."
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 5:50 pm | |
| Got bored so I decided to do some photoshop for the headers and other stuff, sorz.
Also, planning on only having two characters, just so I can switch off if I get bored with one and then go back to the other later. |
| | | thorogoodd
Posts : 701 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 27 Location : London, Ontario
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:03 pm | |
| I accept, it's a well thought out character and I like the involvement with Scars (though the news is a bit outdated). | |
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:10 pm | |
| DAMN, That is one stripperiffic dress. My family thought I was looking at porn.
Anyways, I'm not sure about all the servants and bodyguards. It's asking for a lot. Especially considering that you're a newer member. |
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:29 pm | |
| Lowered it a bit.
Though I looked at the PK'd character Tzakuto and noticed that as a first character, the character had a huge number of servants (phasewasps) when all this character has is a small number of servants and bodyguards. I am fine with going down to small numbers but just saying that the number of bodyguards and servants before wasn't /too/ much. |
| | | Psycheandromida He Who Wears Sunglasses at Night
Posts : 1503 Join date : 2009-09-25
| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:45 pm | |
| - Speful wrote:
- Lowered it a bit.
Though I looked at the PK'd character Tzakuto and noticed that as a first character, the character had a huge number of servants (phasewasps) when all this character has is a small number of servants and bodyguards. I am fine with going down to small numbers but just saying that the number of bodyguards and servants before wasn't /too/ much. That character was made in a time when we had a head admin that would award people with god powers if they cybered with him. I don't like the idea of this character having several servants, a doctor and bodyguards, as there's no defined limit as to what their capable of. You could start a bar fight, have the bodyguards wreck a bunch of shit, the next day they're all perfectly healthy. The character has some unimportant lore-related issues of no consequence, being '---' is not a birthplace, judging from the character, she would probably be from Sida. Also, 'Neutral' in itself is not an alignment unless you were most likely referring to 'True Neutral'. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:57 pm | |
| Thanks for the help. Also the doctor doesn't work on magic, so it's not like "Get a broken arm and healed the next day." I don't like the idea of things being healed rather quickly and I am one to rp out having an injury, the doctor is just for the idea that my character isn't sitting there dieing and awaiting medical attention from some random character say if she, or her guards were to get hurt.
Now does having atleast two guards, doctor, personal servant and another home servant work out?
Edit: Also if you could accept me on SF so I could have quicker access to your help with editting this character.
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| | | B3SERK
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:07 pm | |
| I like the idea of a char that has servants and a bodyguard and such, no one else really has any, and there dont really seem to be any nobles or gentry in olden, cept, if this did happen, I would tone it down to one servant, two bodyguards. | |
| | | thorogoodd
Posts : 701 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 27 Location : London, Ontario
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:08 pm | |
| Or a servant, a bodyguard, and a doctor. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:34 pm | |
| Looked at what Psyche said and made some edits toward the character. If there is anything else someone wants to take note of, feel free. |
| | | Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:38 am | |
| Just try not to have characters with their own personal army and hospital at their disposal.
The town has a doctor, it has guards too. A personal guard or two personal guards is already a stretch and attracts attention, considering Surna is under a small famine, payment is going to be hard... and if the guards are following her out of pure loyalty, there's a limit to how-many patriots one can have until it becomes a cult-ish thing.
Otherwise the character seems decent. The pursuation seems a bit based on the fact that she's half naked, but then again, many characters are. *COUGH*ZAKU*COUGH* | |
| | | Krug
Posts : 1397 Join date : 2010-01-20 Age : 31 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:07 am | |
| - Quote :
- Also if you could accept me on SF so I could have quicker access to your help with editting this character.
Add me too! :3 But yeah, this character checks out with me. Obviously there's been time and effort put into it. Looks awesome. Got my accept. | |
| | | Markka Moderator
Posts : 916 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:12 am | |
| - Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
- Otherwise the character seems decent. The purrsuation seems a bit based on the fact that she's half naked, but then again, many characters are. *COUGH*ZAKU*COUGH*
Sex sells, it has been proven again. | |
| | | Phry
Posts : 1591 Join date : 2010-04-17 Location : UK
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:37 am | |
| The issues with her entourage seem have been sorted out, so i offer my accept. | |
| | | themodtester
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:31 am | |
| I'll just join the bandwagon and say accept. Do I get a cookie? | |
| | | thorogoodd
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| Persuasion isn't really a skill you can measure with bars. It's kinda like stealth, it's more of a "how you RP it" thing.
Either way....themodtester doesn't get a cookie cause he asked, everyone else in the thread can have a cookie though. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 2:07 pm | |
| - Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
- Just try not to have characters with their own personal army and hospital at their disposal.
For someone who is wealthy and with no combat skills, they'd want some insured protection, so really two bodyguards isn't much of an army. A hospital? You mean one doctor that works without magic, if she or her servants were to actually get injuried it'd result in recovery RP that would take a while depending on the actually injury. - Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
- A personal guard or two personal guards is already a stretch and attracts attention, considering Surna is under a small famine, payment is going to be hard... and if the guards are following her out of pure loyalty, there's a limit to how-many patriots one can have until it becomes a cult-ish thing.
Her bodyguards work under a low fee considering they are provided the shelter and food that accompany Rosa. She would have been with enough supplies to last her for a bit anyways. And she has more than enough money to provide food for her small amount of servants and herself. - Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
- The pursuation seems a bit based on the fact that she's half naked, but then again, many characters are. *COUGH*ZAKU*COUGH*
Also you shouldn't base her entirely off the image, hard to find a picture that wasn't too bad. |
| | | Psycheandromida He Who Wears Sunglasses at Night
Posts : 1503 Join date : 2009-09-25
| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:50 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Also you shouldn't base her entirely off the image, hard to find a picture that wasn't too bad.
I have a gigantic magic character picture folder, you just need to ask permission and show me the picture you want before using it. As for this character, unless anyone has anything else to say I'm giving it an accept. | |
| | | Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
| Subject: Re: Rosalee Pulston Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:01 pm | |
| I'm not saying bodyguards and personal doctors are unreasonable. Hell. In this case it sounds completely plausible. I'm just warning you about the minor things like Surna's state, possible loyalty issues and ecetera... I do find that having real players playing the entourage more fun but thats just me.
Anyway, accepted on my part unless I already said that... | |
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