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thorogoodd
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 | Subject: Drav'kar Jee'shir  Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:34 pm | |
|  "War brings death to the weak, for that reason I am strong."Name: Drav'kar Jee'shir
Age: 224
Race: Dragonborn
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Kar'rasa, Sida---------=| Description 'n' Appearance |=---------
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Scale Color: Dark Green
Eye Color: Violent Red
Height: 6'3
Weight: 500 lbs
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Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Positive Traits: Quick Thinker, Strong Beliefs
Negative Traits: Violent, Headstrong
Languages: Draconic, Common
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Deity: Garyx
Affiliations: None.
Occupation: Mercenary, and Soldier of Kar'rasa when the need arises.
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Basic Skills:
Intelligence & Cunning
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He is as smart as any average Dragonborn, perhaps slightly more intelligent, but not by much.
Strength
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He is very strong from all his combat experience, and conditioning from wearing heavy armor and wielding two swords.
Agility & Dexterity
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He isn't particularly dexterous, excluding his whip-like tail, which is extremely fast.
Perception
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He has average eye-sight for a Dragonborn.
Stamina & Endurance
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He has an extremely high endurance and stamina, he knows his limits and can fight for hours on end without tiring, but when he does get tired, we wipes out completely.
Willpower & Fortitude
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He is easily angered and easy to provoke, making him have a weaker Willpower.
Advanced Skills:
Dual-Weapon Combat
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He is extremely practiced in using his two blades, having much experience with them during combat and training.
Heavy Armor
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He has only (relatively) recently added his armor to his combat outfit, causing him to be slightly inexperienced with it, but because he doesn't have his arms and tail armored, it doesn't inhibit his combat skill too harshly.
Tail Combat
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He has very good skill at using his tail as a weapon in combat, to help disarm his opponent, trip his opponent, and many other things with his tail, but he can only make quick, lashing or gripping movements, nothing precise.
Fire Magic
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He has a low skill level with fire magic, usually using it as a distracting flare during combat, causing small shoots of rather harmless flame from his weapons to try and intimidate or scare his opponent.
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---------=| Biography |=---------- To Do --------------------------------
---------=| Tasks 'n' Goals |=---------
Find an Apprentice - On-Going
Serve Garyx - On-Going
Serve Kar'rasa - Eternal
Find a sparring partner - On-Going
---------=| Inventory 'n' Equipment |=---------
[ Black Coloured-Steel Helmet]
[ Black Coloured-Steel Cuirass]
[ Black Coloured-Steel Greaves ]
[ Black Coloured-Steel Longsword]
[ Black Coloured-Steel Longsword]
[ Ring with Sand Inside]
[ Chain to Keep Ring]
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Mack
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:37 pm | |
| don't say just "black steel", it'll be confused with the actual blacksteel of occitan
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:38 pm | |
| Oh, didn't know Occitan had blacksteel, I'll try to make it different then >.> | |
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Mack
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:39 pm | |
| fuck shit i just remembered i need to post that lorepage | |
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Phry
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:51 pm | |
| It just seems... why is this in Surna? | |
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:01 pm | |
| - Phry wrote:
- It just seems... why is this in Surna?
That would have to be explained in a Backstory. But instead I'll write a small blurb here. When Imperia was being sacked, Drav felt a need to join the fight, but he found out on his way to Imperia that it had been sacked, and that Surna was the new seat of power, so he went to Surna instead to help defend it in hope of riches, glory, and fame. | |
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:22 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:12 pm | |
| I don't see anything overly wrong with this, The strengths are balanced out by weaknesses in other areas. The only thing I can see that might be weird is how he can use magic if he has low willpower, but I'm not entirely sure that matters.
Approve. | |
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Psycheandromida
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:01 pm | |
| If he has a weak will, why does it say he has a strong will in his 'positive traits', who is Garyx, and who is Kar'rasa?
Aside from those questions, I'm starting to get tired of people applying for high-powered characters when they should be developing the characters they already have. A commoner dragonborn is okay, vampires are pushing it, event characters are one thing, but this I cannot approve.
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Pat
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:32 pm | |
| - Psycheandromida wrote:
- If he has a weak will, why does it say he has a strong will in his 'positive traits', who is Garyx, and who is Kar'rasa?
Aside from those questions, I'm starting to get tired of people applying for high-powered characters when they should be developing the characters they already have. A commoner dragonborn is okay, vampires are pushing it, event characters are one thing, but this I cannot approve.
From the Dragonborn thread: Origination: Most Dragonborn are born in their homeland, Kar'rasa So he'd be saying he's serving his homeland. And Garyx is one of the Dragonborn 'deities' who are essentially revered dragons of the past, in a saint/ancestor worship-type gesture. Both tidbits are modern-lore accurate. | |
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Mack
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:39 pm | |
| garyx makes me think "Gary Gygax" | |
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Markka
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 5:10 pm | |
| Bumping dis shiz, by the way. | |
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Phry
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:41 pm | |
| - Quote :
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:17 pm | |
| I don't think a biography is really necessary. It's the skills, race, and equipment that matters, right? | |
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Psycheandromida
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:44 pm | |
| - Pat wrote:
- I don't think a biography is really necessary. It's the skills, race, and equipment that matters, right?
If that's the point, why is this a roleplay community, and not a munchkin's introduction to DnD community? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:54 pm | |
| fghhghghgg i mean as far as accepting goes. It's up to them to create a backstory, but all we care about in the acceptance process is the level of power, right?
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Markka
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:31 pm | |
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Phry
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| | Subject: Re: Drav'kar Jee'shir Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:11 am | |
| I personally wouldn't accept something without an attempt at a backstory, but, /shrug. | |
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