Ferraine Alcada

BASIC INFORMATION :

NAME - Farraine Acalda
AGE - 15
GENDER - Male
RACE - Elf
BIRTH - Sarkun, Noble District
DEATH - None
JOB - Thief
Gold - 29x Gold
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SKILLS / ABILITIES :

7/10 - LONG RANGED COMBAT

3/10 - CLOSE RANGED COMBAT

4/10 - ATHLETICS

4/10 - SNEAK

3/10 - BARGAIN

0/10 - AIR MAGIC

0/10 - WATER MAGIC

0/10 - FIRE MAGIC

0/10 - EARTH MAGIC

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Physical Description

Height - 5'9"
Weight - 102.65 pounds
Build - Athletic
Hair Colour - Dark Brown
Eye Color - Caribbean Blue
Skin Color - Peach
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Equipment/Inventory

Clothes/Armour :

1x Woolen Boots
1x Woolen Pants
1x Woolen Shirt
1x Woolen Cap

Weapons/Shields :

1x Yew Bow /w 30 Steel Arrows (hunting, long ranged combat)
1x Steel Long Sword (face to face combat, primary melee)
1x Iron Shield (defensive item, to block any hits)
1x Wooden-Handle, Iron-Blade Hatchet (breaking into buildings, face to face with animal while hunting, secondary melee)
1x Butcher Knife (shedding the hide, or chopping the horns off of a dead animal)

Potions/Booze/Foods :

1x 1 lbs. of Grain - BAG

Others :

1x Bucket
1x Shoe
5x Empty Bottles

Tools/Books :

NONE

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Biography

Ferraine was born and raised in Sarkun, and as a child, had 5 older brothers, and three older sisters. Him and his brothers loved to practice there bow skills and spar with each other, his sisters on the other hand loved to write stories and poems, they also loved to cook with there mother in the kitchen. Ferraine went to school and learned how to read, and speak Elvic. Ferraine also worked with his dad as a hunter, and Ferraine was very loyal and dedicated to his father -- Until the day he died... His oldest brother wanted to take all power and control of the house and killed the father in his sleep, of course Ferraine ran away to escape that life. Ferraine lost everything he had, and he did not even have the chance to take his stuff with him, or say a bid farewell to his other brother or mother -- Or say a praire for his fathers soul. He left home, and headed for Surna to have a better life. He traveled to the nearest town closest to Sarkun, Immaku -- And, had little choice, but had to steal from the village. So, he headed for the tavern, and rented out a room. He waited out until midnight and headed outside quietly. He headed for the barn, broke in, stole a horse, as well as some grains and apples. He quickly rushed out of the village, and escaped. He had traveled to Surna to start a newer and better life. As he reached Surna -- He had nothing but a set of clothing, a bag of grains and apples, and a horse. So, he decided since he did not have much money, he decided to sell the horse and the grains, he got a good 39 gold pieces off of that, and decided to make a use of it and bought a Yew Bow for 20 gold pieces, and then wandered off into the forest to hunt and make a little money. And that is all how it started.

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ALIGNMENT - Chaotic Neutral
FAVOURED WEAPON - Bow and Arrow
FAVORED TARGETS - None
DEITY - Akadi
TASK - None

Looks better, the bio's a little generic, but that's totally fine.

Some of his skills are a little high for a lad his age, namely his skills in Athletics and Long Ranged Combat, lower them, wouldya? Also, what's a dark elf?

15 and expert in long-ranged combat. Athletics, doubt they'd be that high. Yeah, I don't think so, sorry. Bargaining, ergh. That's something your interaction with other players decide, really. Useless skill. Magic skills. Are you intending to have these rather broad elemental magic schools -and- learn most, if not all, of them? Also what pot-... wait.

FFFFFFFFFUCK. Munroe took his excellent potionary page with himself! Now we need to somehow re-implement that whole darn thing. XELO!

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FFFFFFFFFUCK. Munroe took his excellent potionary page with himself! Now we need to somehow re-implement that whole darn thing. XELO!

I'll see if I can't get Munroe to give me a copy.

Quote :

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUCKKK. Munroe took his penis and shoved it someones ass crack, and drank a potion to make it bigger so it would stay in there for the rest of there life.

what the fuck

Bumping. More opinions, comments, questions, concerns and whatnot. If the owner isn't active or this won't be approved, I suppose we might aswell throw this out of here.

I don't think Aeria even has dark elves; just elves.

Also I don't see why the format has to be like a TnB forum metrocop application.

I thought dark elves were Drows, hell, Pat said dark elves were Drows.

yeah dark elves exist as drow

we have dark elves

bump to save from autoprune

There is no autoprune, there are only hilariously short-tempered admins with an itchy finger for moving threads.

Xeloras wrote:

There is no autoprune, there are only hilariously short-tempered admins with an itchy finger for moving threads.

Are you serious? lol.

Xeloras wrote:

There is no autoprune, there are only hilariously short-tempered admins with an itchy finger for moving threads.

hey i have a name you know

I'm considering the "Failed" stamp on this one.

This seems unoriginal. It looks like he threw it together in fifteen minutes. The skills are high for no reason. Even if he had been practicing his whole life he never had any combat experience. Furthermore it says he was born in the noble district. Why would his father be a hunter? Especially if they have internal power struggles going on; it makes no sense.

Mack wrote:

Xeloras wrote:

There is no autoprune, there are only hilariously short-tempered admins with an itchy finger for moving threads.

hey i have a name you know

I would think he was probably refering to my admin meeting regarding 'nuking everything in the forums' recently.

Sadly this was denied, but I did get to delete some empty sections c:


Regarding the actual character, in essence, there isn't anything hugely wrong with this application, just inconsistencies and noobish mistakes you'd expect from a, well, newbie.

I'd say accept before deleting someone's work for no good reason.

The character is all dandy, aside from the newbie mistakes, the thing is... Last post was from Feb 15. Is that a good enough reason?

Provided there's the faintest possibility of return, we shouldn't deny/failed character it.

Just put it in accepted for now.

this belings in archived, and im moving it there.
fuck failed/accepted characters.