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Subject: Katie McCollen Mon May 31, 2010 3:39 pm
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Name Katie Mc'Collen
Age 16
Gender Female
Race Kazuth
Birthplace Sida
Skills Acrobats Agility Stealth
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Personality Playful, energetic and extremely curious, Kathy is always out and about looking to discover and learn about the seemingly magical forest that surrounds Surna. Although very outgoing and social, Kathy does not tend to like hanging around strangers, she would much rather stay secluded from others due to being "Different". With her uneasiness around others, Kathy has thought herself how to successfully pick pocket others, using her skills to gather food and on some occasions valuables. Kathy suffers from a rather large fear of water, never going near it without an extremely good reason.
Backstory
Chapter 1 [Childhood]
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Born in Sida, Kathy's family were not the wealthy type, Kazuths' usually being slaves in the desert lands. As a child, Kathy was kept away from other infants, her parents were too paranoid to leave their hide out. Kathy never really complained, she entertained herself by reading old books, most of them novels about thievery and romance. Her childhood was not the most interesting and therefor Kathy's mind wandered, yearning to explore the world that laid just across the desert plains.
Chapter 2 [Orphanage]
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At the age of nine, Kathy had already suffered the loss of her mother. Her father had left about a month ago for food and supplies yet never returned... Whether or not he was dead was unknown, but Kathy, convinced that her father had fallen into slavery, decided to leave the hide out. It wasn't safe alone without supplies, and she decided that attempting an escape could not be worse than starving to death. She collected what she could, stuffed books and clothes into her backpack before sitting at the only window present in the house, looking out through the window's fractured frame. She waited until the sun was ready to set before leaving the house.
Her travel went smoothly until dawn arrived. She had met up with a traveler whom wore a dusty cloak and odd mask. Her curiosity kicked in as she was riding on the back of his horse, staring at the odd, crow-like mask. She attempted to poke it, only to have her wrist caught by his hand;
"What are you doing." The stranger asked in a monotone voice.
"Uhh... Nothin'... That's a weird mask though, where'd you find it?" She asked, still staring at him.
He said nothing for a moment, Kathy bit her lower lip, afraid she might have offended him.
"A friend." He simply replied.
"Oh... So he just gave it to ya'?"
"You can say that." He replied. "He died after one of his concuctions blew up."
"Wizard?"
"No, plague doctor."
"Ew... You took a diseased man's belongings?" She pressed on.
The man only sighed and Kathy took it as a sign that he did not want to continue the conversation. She simply watched the plains go by as the stranger made his way to Sida's borders.
The ride took a few hours, Kathy managing to slip a quick nap during the travel before being woken up by the man whom told her they had arrived.
"Gnh-- What? Oh! Thanks." She said, waking up from her sleep before sliding off the horse.
The man gave her a nod, remaining seated on the horse's saddle.
"So... What's your name?" She asked in an attempt to stay polite.
"Jerry." He replied, guiding his horse in a semi circle.
Kathy arched her eyebrows, the stranger being very odd in her eyes but she thanked him anyway considering he was generous enough to guide her safely through the slavers nation.
Chapter 3 [Welcome to Surna. No passports needed.]
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It had been a few years since Kathy left her home and life behind. She had roamed cities and villages throughout the land, looking for a new home. Over crowded cities often had gangs of her own kind, Kazuths waging war on other gangs. She had housed with one of them for a year as a matter of fact. The year went by smoothly and Kathy had felt the soul wrenching feelings of her first crush, one that had lasted fairly short after learning that said crush was already in a happy relationship. Her life was filled with lessons of self defense and thievery, a skill she had developed fairly well during her time with the gang. Her mind continued to wander however, the city was too big, food supplies were too small and laws were corrupt. At the age of 15 she had decided to leave her home once more, heading for smaller lands.
As she dwelled in smaller towns, people were less welcoming. People were more racist against Kazuths and their reputation of malicious acts of thievery yet she digressed. She bought herself a small bonette (with stolen coins) and went by unnoticed by the general public, her feline characteristics.
Kathy now resides in Surna's slums, often seen walking through the forest with a small notebook and pen, sketching the different plants and wildlife.
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Height 5'4 or 64 inches
Weight 90 lbs
Build Slender
Skin Color Pale
Hair Color Brunette
Eye Color Mauve/Pink
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General Magic Usage:1 / 20 [ |||||||||||||||||||| ]
Equipment (A French Beret) (Zaku's Red Scarf) (Small Satchel (poor condition)) (Small backpack) (1x Small Jacket) (1x Undershirts) (2x White Tanktop) (1x Shorts) (1x Sleeping Gown) (2x Cotton Socks) (Note book + Pencil) (Black Sleeping Gown (see picture))
Favored Enemy Canines
Favored Weapon Claws and teeth
Goals (Completed) -Arrive to Surna- -Find a safe place to call home- (Jen's Inn) -Make friends- (Shelob, Zaku, Jens, Devyn) -Learn a new skill- -Escape or Join the Forgotten Army's reign- -Steal a cookie- --- (On-going) -Get some new friends- -Find true love- -Annoy Thorn and live to tell the tale- -Learn to swim- --- (Canceled) -Apologise to Kale for beating him up- -Beat Kale up to relieve some stress- -Find a new family- -Discover new types of flowers and animals to draw- (Not allowed near the town's garden) --- (Eternal) -Survive as a Kazuth- ---
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Note Most people don't necessarily like Kazuths because of their history of gangs, thievery and general maliciousness. Their considered lower class, lower than normal citizen or even peasant. I don't expect everyone to hate Kazuths ICly but I don't expect everyone to be nice ether when and if they find out she is one... That's why she wears a french berette; to blend in with the normal crowed.
Also, the name is Katie unlike the picture claims. Small spelling mistake I made while photoshoping in class.
MODEL USED
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My MoDeLz, dey no wat u did thar. **Creepy look
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thorogoodd
Posts : 701 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 27 Location : London, Ontario
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Mon May 31, 2010 6:17 pm
No offense, but speed, agility and stealth all seem a bit high.
I'd accept one of them being at seventeen at higher, if the other two were lowered significantly. Remember that speed is straight-line speed, going really, really fast, while agility is swinging on poles, jumping gaps and the like - two different things.
I don't know. It's always my feeling that if a character is highly specialized in one area, they should have very weak abilities in the others to compensate.
Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:32 am
Well I did do that.
She's fast and agile but relatively weak in strength/endurance and has little to no magical skill.
She relies entirely on her speed and agility for most of her activities.
thorogoodd
Posts : 701 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 27 Location : London, Ontario
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:43 am
Maybe just lower Strength some more, and then choose to lower either Speed or Stealth, you don't need 17 Speed to be faster then most people. Most people would only be a 10 or 8 in Speed.
And stealth is an underused skill that depends on your RP ability, I wouldn't see a point in giving it skill points.
Col Awesome
Posts : 61 Join date : 2010-05-03 Age : 28 Location : Colchester
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:00 am
Female Zaku picture. Neato.
Seems underweight for a 15 year old girl, otherwise it is fine.
Your statement is flawed
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I don't expect everyone to hate Kazuths ICly but I don't expect everyone to be nice ether when and if they find out she is one...
I hate Kazuths. Occitan ftw.
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That's why she wears a french berette; to blend in with the normal crowed.
Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?
Fuzzy Wolfy
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Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:15 am
Gambit wrote:
Seems underweight for a 15 year old girl, otherwise it is fine.
Kazuths are naturally much lighter than normal people.
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Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?
Medieval eras are times where people ether dress formally or are considered peasants. Physical attributes like cat ears and cat tails aren't considered normal. Not to mention Kazuths have a history of gang violence in overpopulated towns, thievery, maliciousness overall. Their entire history and reputation leads them to being lower class.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:44 am
Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
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Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?
Medieval eras are times where people ether dress formally or are considered peasants. Physical attributes like cat ears and cat tails aren't considered normal. Not to mention Kazuths have a history of gang violence in overpopulated towns, thievery, maliciousness overall. Their entire history and reputation leads them to being lower class.
THAT EXPLAINED NOTHING
Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:48 am
Then you need to go back to history class, my good man.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:52 am
Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
Then you need to go back to history class, my good man.
No, you didn't explain how the hell a berette is going to save you from racial prejudices. You just rambled on about "du durp da hurp I just read the stuff on Kazuths now I am pro go to history class you dickbutt."
Now watch this.
Fuzzy Wolfy
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Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:13 am
1. Put Berette on head. 2. Make sure the berette covers her catears. 3. Don't let the tail out of her shorts. 4. ??? 5. Profit?
Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:35 pm
Buuuuuuuuuuump.
Markka Moderator
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Character sheet Name: Mirage Silverspine Age: 17 Race: Human
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:51 pm
Only if she can purr cutely.
Kain
Posts : 1427 Join date : 2009-03-24 Location : Somewhere Pat doesn't want me to be
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:13 pm
*** Kain reads Markka's post, twitches, and PLUNGES A SPEAR INTO MARKKA
Ahh, now.. where was I- Oh, right. Ahem.
I accept this. There's no reason not to, as the only Zuth stigmas on Olden were kawaii-kawaii Zuths and cybering Zuths (or both at the same time), and I think we've long since gotten passed those times. Besides, I can't say I've seen any running around, except for Zaku (if Zaku even counts).
Also, not really relevant, but that profile picture has to have been used at least four times now.
Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 4:17 pm
I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.
Kain
Posts : 1427 Join date : 2009-03-24 Location : Somewhere Pat doesn't want me to be
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:11 pm
Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.
Elitism. You should stop doing it.
Fuzzy Wolfy
Posts : 454 Join date : 2010-04-23 Age : 30 Location : Under your bed.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:13 pm
Gambit wrote:
Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.
Elitism. You should stop doing it.
Shit-posting, I should say the same.
Besides, saying that I don't like whore characters is purely my opinion. Not yours.
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:20 pm
[quote=Gambit] durp de durp durp derail etc. [/quote]
You're not futhering this thread in the slightest.
And right now there is nothing even remotely wrong with this thread, so i offer my approval, for what it's worth.
Krug
Posts : 1397 Join date : 2010-01-20 Age : 31 Location : England
Subject: Re: Katie McCollen Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:31 pm
Kain wrote:
the only Zuth stigmas on Olden were kawaii-kawaii Zuths and cybering Zuths (or both at the same time), and I think we've long since gotten passed those times.