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PostSubject: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeMon May 31, 2010 3:39 pm

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Name
Katie Mc'Collen

Age
16

Gender
Female

Race
Kazuth

Birthplace
Sida

Skills
Acrobats
Agility
Stealth

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Personality
Playful, energetic and extremely curious, Kathy is always out and about looking to discover and learn about the seemingly magical forest that surrounds Surna. Although very outgoing and social, Kathy does not tend to like hanging around strangers, she would much rather stay secluded from others due to being "Different". With her uneasiness around others, Kathy has thought herself how to successfully pick pocket others, using her skills to gather food and on some occasions valuables. Kathy suffers from a rather large fear of water, never going near it without an extremely good reason.

Backstory

Chapter 1
[Childhood]
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Chapter 2
[Orphanage]
Spoiler:


Chapter 3
[Welcome to Surna. No passports needed.]
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Height
5'4 or 64 inches

Weight
90 lbs

Build
Slender

Skin Color
Pale

Hair Color
Brunette

Eye Color
Mauve/Pink

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General Magic Usage: 1 / 20
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Speed: 15 / 20
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Flexibility/Acrobatics: 13 / 20
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Physical Endurance/Strength: 7 / 20
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Alignment
Lawful Neutral

Deity
N/A

Equipment
(A French Beret)
(Zaku's Red Scarf)
(Small Satchel (poor condition))
(Small backpack)
(1x Small Jacket)
(1x Undershirts)
(2x White Tanktop)
(1x Shorts)
(1x Sleeping Gown)
(2x Cotton Socks)
(Note book + Pencil)
(Black Sleeping Gown (see picture))


Favored Enemy
Canines

Favored Weapon
Claws and teeth

Goals
(Completed)
-Arrive to Surna-
-Find a safe place to call home- (Jen's Inn)
-Make friends- (Shelob, Zaku, Jens, Devyn)
-Learn a new skill-
-Escape or Join the Forgotten Army's reign-
-Steal a cookie-
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(On-going)
-Get some new friends-
-Find true love-
-Annoy Thorn and live to tell the tale-
-Learn to swim-
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(Canceled)
-Apologise to Kale for beating him up-
-Beat Kale up to relieve some stress-
-Find a new family-
-Discover new types of flowers and animals to draw- (Not allowed near the town's garden)
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(Eternal)
-Survive as a Kazuth-
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Note
Most people don't necessarily like Kazuths because of their history of gangs, thievery and general maliciousness. Their considered lower class, lower than normal citizen or even peasant. I don't expect everyone to hate Kazuths ICly but I don't expect everyone to be nice ether when and if they find out she is one... That's why she wears a french berette; to blend in with the normal crowed.

Also, the name is Katie unlike the picture claims. Small spelling mistake I made while photoshoping in class.


MODEL USED
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeMon May 31, 2010 4:28 pm

I approve of this character, seems cool to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeMon May 31, 2010 4:37 pm

Ughhhhh Kazuths
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeMon May 31, 2010 6:17 pm

No offense, but speed, agility and stealth all seem a bit high.

I'd accept one of them being at seventeen at higher, if the other two were lowered significantly. Remember that speed is straight-line speed, going really, really fast, while agility is swinging on poles, jumping gaps and the like - two different things.

I don't know. It's always my feeling that if a character is highly specialized in one area, they should have very weak abilities in the others to compensate.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 6:32 am

Well I did do that.

She's fast and agile but relatively weak in strength/endurance and has little to no magical skill.

She relies entirely on her speed and agility for most of her activities.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 6:43 am

Maybe just lower Strength some more, and then choose to lower either Speed or Stealth, you don't need 17 Speed to be faster then most people. Most people would only be a 10 or 8 in Speed.

And stealth is an underused skill that depends on your RP ability, I wouldn't see a point in giving it skill points.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 7:03 am

I'd toss this an Approve...


...Also Jail Bait.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 7:10 am

Nerfed her speed, agility and stealth.

Strength is already well below normal humans without being too weak.

She still relies on her speed and agility like most Kazuths.

Edit: Took out stealth

Edit-Edit: Added general notes on Kazuths' social class.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 9:00 am

Female Zaku picture. Neato.

Seems underweight for a 15 year old girl, otherwise it is fine.

Your statement is flawed
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I don't expect everyone to hate Kazuths ICly but I don't expect everyone to be nice ether when and if they find out she is one...
I hate Kazuths. Occitan ftw.
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That's why she wears a french berette; to blend in with the normal crowed.
Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 10:15 am

Gambit wrote:
Seems underweight for a 15 year old girl, otherwise it is fine.

Kazuths are naturally much lighter than normal people.


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Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?

Medieval eras are times where people ether dress formally or are considered peasants. Physical attributes like cat ears and cat tails aren't considered normal. Not to mention Kazuths have a history of gang violence in overpopulated towns, thievery, maliciousness overall. Their entire history and reputation leads them to being lower class.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 10:44 am

Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:


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Christ you have fucking cat ears, how is that going to anything!?

Medieval eras are times where people ether dress formally or are considered peasants. Physical attributes like cat ears and cat tails aren't considered normal. Not to mention Kazuths have a history of gang violence in overpopulated towns, thievery, maliciousness overall. Their entire history and reputation leads them to being lower class.

THAT EXPLAINED NOTHING
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 10:48 am

Then you need to go back to history class, my good man.

/derailment

Bump for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 10:52 am

Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
Then you need to go back to history class, my good man.

No, you didn't explain how the hell a berette is going to save you from racial prejudices. You just rambled on about "du durp da hurp I just read the stuff on Kazuths now I am pro go to history class you dickbutt."

Now watch this.

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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 11:13 am

Neutral

1. Put Berette on head.
2. Make sure the berette covers her catears.
3. Don't let the tail out of her shorts.
4. ???
5. Profit?
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 3:35 pm

Buuuuuuuuuuump.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 3:51 pm

Only if she can purr cutely.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 4:13 pm

*** Kain reads Markka's post, twitches, and PLUNGES A SPEAR INTO MARKKA

Ahh, now.. where was I- Oh, right. Ahem.

I accept this. There's no reason not to, as the only Zuth stigmas on Olden were kawaii-kawaii Zuths and cybering Zuths (or both at the same time), and I think we've long since gotten passed those times. Besides, I can't say I've seen any running around, except for Zaku (if Zaku even counts).

Also, not really relevant, but that profile picture has to have been used at least four times now.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 4:17 pm

I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 4:25 pm

Trinical 'Trini' Vengal was the first, one of Geo's characters. Don't know if her profile exists anymore.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 4:34 pm

Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
[...] I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.

Unless his character wasn't a whore, I'd rather not lower my standards to "Every decent character pictures were already taken to be sluts and whores".
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 5:04 pm

I say approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 5:11 pm

Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.

Elitism. You should stop doing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 5:13 pm

Gambit wrote:
Fuzzy Wolfy wrote:
I didn't go through Olden's old approval/accepted/failed/wtv threads. Unless Zaku has it, I like to think Kathy is the real Kazuth that looks like that without being a whore.

Elitism. You should stop doing it.

Shit-posting, I should say the same.

Besides, saying that I don't like whore characters is purely my opinion. Not yours.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 5:20 pm

[quote=Gambit] durp de durp durp derail etc. [/quote]

You're not futhering this thread in the slightest.

And right now there is nothing even remotely wrong with this thread, so i offer my approval, for what it's worth.
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PostSubject: Re: Katie McCollen   Katie McCollen Icon_minitimeTue Jun 01, 2010 5:31 pm

Kain wrote:
the only Zuth stigmas on Olden were kawaii-kawaii Zuths and cybering Zuths (or both at the same time), and I think we've long since gotten passed those times.

I agree.

PS: Berette is spelt "beret"
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