Shiii--- Drakeson Stukov

Themesong:

Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Birthplace: ???
Skill: Shadows, Unholy, and Darkness Spells.

Biography:
Not So Serious Business Story:
Drakeson Stukov, was born and raised in a unknown village, that was surrounded continuesly and unendingly by heavy mist, making zero visability. Basically this village was any ordinary village, daily bandit raids, etc.. etc.. Your standard issue, Drakeson was born regularly blah blah blah, some old man with a pointy gray hat said "Were taking the hobbits to isengard." no. Thats not the story at all, this boy just grew up, met a random wizard on the road named Elgazmor Dakrtharn. A Cultists of the Shadow Realms, using the magic itself that very well feeds the souls from the host, but makes them stronger every time. So to speak in the lore of the cultists and such blahblah blah. Drakeson stukov was raised, grew up, wondered around with the mysterious man, was taught the ways of a shadow caster, learned it, and soon begun to teach himself and know the power of the Shadow Realms.

(Don't want to add no mary sue bull shit.)

Blah blah blah, he now follows the road of power, wanting to learn the knowldge and capabilities of the Shadow Realms, letting it take his soul slowly, but fighting it off so he doesn't get absolutely stolen and all this other fun stuff.


The Serious Business Story:
Drakeson Stukov, risen and raised in any ordinary village, and had a normal life till age of twelve a shadowcultists group, corruption spread wide and thin amongst their own lands, the king that was so politefully but foolishly giving them a second chance ended in their demise as the Shadow cultists grew in mass power and destroyed the king and all villagers around it. The village of which Drakeson was born was raided destroyed, you name it, rape, pillage, and burn. Sad story, mary sue bullshit, family die, oh crai moar. Anyway, Drakeson was soon to be executed and torn apart to be fed towards the hounds, was given a second path, due to the raids and lost severe numbers of the shadow cultists, he was brainwashed, and trained towards being one of them.

Of course, as such an early age he was of course given that training, in brutal propaganda and everything he was turned into one of the mindless but yet somehow flawless in the arts of shadows. During this he was proclaimed a shadowcaster bretheren at age twenty, when he begun to try and be in the order of the "Howling Ice." which was the order of the shadow cultists called worshipping and praying towards the realms of shadow itself. All that fun stuff being somewhat like priests, he begun to continue do all this at age 23, during this he soon became free willed and not enslaved anymore by the powers of the brainwash, during this a chain events arose in his next three years of life, the first two basically this. He ran away, fled from the tyranny but the power of the Shadow Realm having a grasp on his soul, commanded him and soon corrupte him further, so trying to avoid being a monster he became to be friends with the monster and avoid dieing completely.

As the time came he trained himself in the arts of shadow casting, calling upon the powers of the shadow realms he became an excelled student and such. Though not powerful as many others, he stilll has time to go. And now ends up in this town blah blah and moves on with his life but forgot where he was after a malfunction in one of his spells.

Capabilities / Skills / Spells:
The Arts of Shadowcasters are dangerous and takes years to try and not be consumed by the shadow realm itself, from taking their very energy and using it against their enemies, henceforth all initiates must learn the shadow realm and the planes itself. As he continued to do so these are the following skills he has.

1: Considering he needs energies from the shadow realm, he considerably uses the shadow around him, stealing it he goes to cast it upon the enemies, he does not at all take the powers from the mana or the magic itself, its considered a "Supernatural" ability, in other words but can only do it once every 8 hours and 15 minutes of resting.

2: The Spells that of which he uses the shadows are the following for now since really he doesn't know the advance techniques or the initiates yet only the apprentices;
Shadow Blade: Basically the shadow envelopes his hands that he wants at will, and during this the shadow blade is very well physical and can pierce through someones torso if its unarmored, its called the "Umbral touch." where he uses it to try and slice his enemies down with the energies of the shadows and even if it makes a scratch it would do so end up slowing their speed down if they try to flee.

Shadow Skin: Thickens the skin and flesh from the shadow energies turning into his own personal armor.

Dusk and Dawn: Basically with this the whole area around him at will can turn into a shadowy illuminated area, where he can hide into it and use it towards his own will. But can't use it to channel his spells,.
(Stay with this, for now)

Equipment Wise:
Just a standard robe, its a wizard really.

Oh and isn't that fast or anything, still pretty weak physically.

Alignment: LE
Favored Enemy: Shiiii- Hates Lolpaladins, Priests, anything holy of that nature.
Favored Weapon: Shiii- His Shadow magic.
Deity: Only worships the Plane of Shadows.
Current Task:
1-: WTF? WHERE AM I!?

Picture:
HAIL TO THE KING BABY


Yeah right..

Drakeson ---v

Go into more detail? p;

?
Going into more details of what?
Its just a regular man, hell he is just like a damn wizard.
If I go into details it shall turn into a Mary Sue.
The enrichment of this story is too awesome to be spoiled now.
<Sage Nods.>

But fineee

Drakesonian wrote:

?
Going into more details of what?
Its just a regular man, hell he is just like a damn wizard.
If I go into details it shall turn into a Mary Sue.
The enrichment of this story is too awesome to be spoiled now.
<Sage Nods.>

But fineee

Detail won't make it a mary sue, just improve the bio a little, elaborate on the spells he has, etc.

This isn't going to be accepted until it's given depth. Unexplained powers, armour and sword makes him a mary sue.

Ah okay, Gotsa it then.

Done.

Drakesonian wrote:

Deity: Only worships the Plane of Shadows.

You mean Shar?

Nope
He doesn't worship no Vampire Goddess
Just the Plane of Shadows itself.

Seeing as Shar created the Plane of Shadows, it kind of follows that whoever worships it would worship her...

<Shrugs.> Doesn't mean he's going worship a bitch.
He's going worship the Plane of Shadows that holds his fate, not a bitch.

Um, that's a bit nonsensical, but whatever. You're going to be a big bullseye for Shar and her followers.

But that's assuming this character passes. Right now, seems a tad much.

PS: If you think posting his full story will make people cry "Mary Sue!" then change it. Don't just hide it away. We're going to find out eventually. But if you just don't want to post it, then that's cool.

If it's imperative to the character and his abilities as a whole he has to post it.

I put it in..?

Well, I guess I can review this for real. I don't like it, it's yet another generic shadow knight with uncanny talent towards shadow weave without having any knowledge about it whatsoever, hence worshiping the shadow realm and not Shar. In essence, he -does- worship Shar, the character itself just isn't smart enough to notice, which is kind of funny, I guess. The backstory is an utter joke, for that matter. I'd like to hear community's opinion.