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Psycheandromida
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 | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge  Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:00 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:52 am | |
| Give me some criticism, fools. | |
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Achosi
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:15 am | |
| I think kazuth is a pretty cool guy. Eh steals melons and doesn't afraid of anything. | |
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Psycheandromida
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:09 pm | |
| To be honest there's no criticism to give, Zaku. Your format is, as always, eye candy and fun to look at, but in-depth criticism is only really warranted for characters that use magic or other complicated things. Although now I notice you have skill bars with no description, which I find to be really pointless, but even then the character is a fairly standard person, except for the engineering piece, which you should really expand on. - Spoiler:
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B3SERK
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:23 pm | |
| Well the skill bars aren't very high, especially for combat skills
unless three bars = master at the brawling arts | |
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TRUlyjuST
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:21 pm | |
| He has a very good chemistry with Kurt, I like it... accept. | |
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Xeloras
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:26 pm | |
| I'd just like a little detail on his lockpicking skill, then I'd accept.
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B3SERK
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:32 pm | |
| I'd just like a little detail on his cooking skill, then I'd accept. | |
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Munroe
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:57 pm | |
| More detail on just how good he is with string instruments, please. | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 6:03 am | |
| - Munroe wrote:
- More detail on just how good he is with string instruments, please.
I won't sugarcoat it here, Martyn has spent time in the wastes utilizing his lute (as a dangerous weapon) against wandering umberhulks as Eytinge family tradition calls for. I know it may seem like a lot, but I promise I would powergame. :X Also, for Engineering. Martyn was born a savant when it comes to tinkering and the like, this isn't to say he knows much about guns- or airships (these are his goals, however) but at this current time the only things he's able to really fiddle with are clocks, watches, etc. Little things like that. The skill bar is high more so because I'm trying to shed light on the fact that he is ABLE to become a very gifted engineer, and he has the potential to work on much greater projects in the far future. As for lockpicking, Martyn is an amateur thief - it runs in his blood, so picking locks would be no challenge for him. Needless to say I'm not going to waltz around server and tell people to open their doors for me just because my character page was accepted, any sort've 'lockpicking' RP that will take place will be extensive, lengthy, and well roleplayed - I assure you. | |
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Xeloras
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:05 am | |
| Alright then, I'll be accepting this. | |
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Krug
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:07 am | |
| Likewise, gotta let this through. :3
My vote of course, doesn't count but idgaf | |
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:19 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:21 am | |
| Move this thread, bitches. | |
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Xeloras
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:24 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:04 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:52 am | |
| Also updated, threw in alignment and shed light on that fact that Martyn's entire goal in life is to become the greatest adventurer / hero in the WORLD. | |
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Munroe
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:53 am | |
| - Zaku wrote:
- Martyn's entire goal in life is to become the greatest adventurer / hero in the WORLD.
Pffhahahahaha | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:01 pm | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:24 pm | |
| update.  Martyn made some friends. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sun Jan 15, 2012 3:44 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:13 am | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:40 pm | |
| Update - Quote :
- Acquired:
- 1x Hooded Poncho
- 1x Rusty Short Sword
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B3SERK
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:59 pm | |
| Now let the chain murdering begin | |
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Zaku
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| | Subject: Re: Martyn Eytinge Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:11 pm | |
| Also updated his goals & tasks accordingly with his BROKEN NOSE. :'( | |
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